| "Family Connections" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: treuse On: May 16, 2003 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. you must continue this. and no, that isnt a request.*does a fake cough*
u had better continue this fic. it is very rare that i come back to read updates. and its only if i like them.on my favorite authors list u r,
*drumroll* #4!bonzai!l'll come back later.ja ne! |
Reviewed By: ~*Neko-Sama*~ On: April 29, 2003 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really really good. I have read some of your other fics, and those were wonderful too! I rated this based on your talent, which is impeccible. I really like your story and the ending was hilarious. I really look forward to seeing more of your work, it all is excellent.
~*Neko-Sama*~ |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 22:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
And damn my spelling! :P
That was supposed to be inquiring. |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the end?! I freaking don't think so! Ahhhh!!! I'm left with so many questions! I have to know more! Damn my inquirering mind! Ahhh!!
*clears her throat and dusts an imaginary lint ball off her shit* Anyway, with that little tirade over, I just want you to know that I enjoyed this little piece of fanfiction, and I hope you decide to write more of it. Though, I have to admit that that ending line had me laughing. *snickers* "I'll make the coffee." ^_^
Great job! |
Reviewed By: Kethry On: April 08, 2003 12:38 CDT
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When are you going to update?!!!! There's too many unanswered questions to those little hints you put in this story...like Kagome being strong enough to pick up Sango in a hug, the mid-level slip, the gold eyes....(unless I'm a complete baka and seeing more into this just because I want it to continue) and some other things mentioned as well. Please update soon, would love to read more of this and your other stories. You are an excellent writer, thank you for sharing them with us. *bows* |
Reviewed By: Anime~Angel On: April 05, 2003 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best of the best of the best. Please write more! ^.^V |
Reviewed By: PsYcHoKeLl On: April 02, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE TELL ME THAT'S NOT THE END!!!! you really need to add more, although i will say i don't see a real plot to this, but you need to add more anyway!!! PLEASE???? |
Reviewed By: Earnest connoisseur On: March 20, 2003 23:14 CST
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This was an enjoyable fic, but it really isn't an ending. It is far to long to be able to satisfactorly shrugg it off like this. Please finnish it off properly. |
Reviewed By: Witch Child [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! "I'll make the coffee" That was so funny! lol! Keep writting! |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 13:27 CST
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IT WILL NOT AND SHALL NOT BE THE END! PLEASE NO!!!!!!!! CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!
That was really funny. Poor Inu got beaten to a bloody pulp AGAIN...^^
If you don't continue I'll send my kat PB after you he eats a lot and is physically fit and can get u...ok maybe not...I LIKE COFFE!!!
Allie |
Reviewed By: ladyKalaNag On: March 12, 2003 15:49 CST
Comment/Review:
please say maybe not inuyahsa was so sweet to kagome. Miroku has all right to be pissed off at inuyasha and i really dont think miroku is going be talking to inuyahsa for awhile let alone let him go on adate with his lilttle cousin. please write more. |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 21:50 CST
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okay so me likiey u update kapesh? :)....... OR ELSE!!! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another monster from the I.D.!
Compared to the rest of Ookami's stuff, this is a bit lackluster (she says as she finishes reading it for the fifth time). IMHO, this story would have been better with some more info about this A.U. Inuyasha. Is he human in this? Do demons masquerade as humans? Does Miroku know?! ...not that having his best friend sleep with his baby sister-cousin isn't reason enough to want to exorcise him. Why does this Inuyasha connect with this Kagome the way he does? |
Reviewed By: miko Reena On: March 09, 2003 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your story it was the greatest.I am hear by declearing you the best fanfiction writer who ever live and if anyone disagrees i'll kill them. i'm dieing to know what happens so plz write more plz. |
Reviewed By: saiyankiyse On: March 09, 2003 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear by whatever god of your choice that you are the BEST author ever to pick up a pen ( or maybe a keyboard)! This fic was great! GREAT! GREAT! GREAT! GREAT! GREAT! That was so mean to end it like that. I was wondering why the chapter was so short went i looked at my scroll bar. I was wondering what the deal was with the flash of gold and more importantly, how is miroku going to act once he calms down? Please don't make this the end? PLEASE? |
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