| "Family Connections" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: PsYcHoKeLl On: April 02, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE TELL ME THAT'S NOT THE END!!!! you really need to add more, although i will say i don't see a real plot to this, but you need to add more anyway!!! PLEASE???? |
Reviewed By: Earnest connoisseur On: March 20, 2003 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
This was an enjoyable fic, but it really isn't an ending. It is far to long to be able to satisfactorly shrugg it off like this. Please finnish it off properly. |
Reviewed By: Witch Child [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! "I'll make the coffee" That was so funny! lol! Keep writting! |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 13:27 CST
Comment/Review:
IT WILL NOT AND SHALL NOT BE THE END! PLEASE NO!!!!!!!! CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!
That was really funny. Poor Inu got beaten to a bloody pulp AGAIN...^^
If you don't continue I'll send my kat PB after you he eats a lot and is physically fit and can get u...ok maybe not...I LIKE COFFE!!!
Allie |
Reviewed By: ladyKalaNag On: March 12, 2003 15:49 CST
Comment/Review:
please say maybe not inuyahsa was so sweet to kagome. Miroku has all right to be pissed off at inuyasha and i really dont think miroku is going be talking to inuyahsa for awhile let alone let him go on adate with his lilttle cousin. please write more. |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 21:50 CST
Comment/Review:
okay so me likiey u update kapesh? :)....... OR ELSE!!! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another monster from the I.D.!
Compared to the rest of Ookami's stuff, this is a bit lackluster (she says as she finishes reading it for the fifth time). IMHO, this story would have been better with some more info about this A.U. Inuyasha. Is he human in this? Do demons masquerade as humans? Does Miroku know?! ...not that having his best friend sleep with his baby sister-cousin isn't reason enough to want to exorcise him. Why does this Inuyasha connect with this Kagome the way he does? |
Reviewed By: miko Reena On: March 09, 2003 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your story it was the greatest.I am hear by declearing you the best fanfiction writer who ever live and if anyone disagrees i'll kill them. i'm dieing to know what happens so plz write more plz. |
Reviewed By: saiyankiyse On: March 09, 2003 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear by whatever god of your choice that you are the BEST author ever to pick up a pen ( or maybe a keyboard)! This fic was great! GREAT! GREAT! GREAT! GREAT! GREAT! That was so mean to end it like that. I was wondering why the chapter was so short went i looked at my scroll bar. I was wondering what the deal was with the flash of gold and more importantly, how is miroku going to act once he calms down? Please don't make this the end? PLEASE? |
Reviewed By: Cat-Goddess On: March 09, 2003 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good. Really Good. All my cat-minions and even my semi-evil cat-minion agree with me.
I think you should update and have Kag meet the O.S.W.F(Oh So WonderFul)**cat-minions GAG be hind their goddess** Fluffy(Sesshoumaru for all you who suck and actully DON'T KNOW his adroble nickname)I, personally, dont like him,but he DOES make the story more interesting...
Gotta go before my cat-minions start a rebellion again or I lose my sanity...
again. ^_^;
oh,yeah I LOVE YOUR WEBSITE!!!!!
ALL YA PEEPS WHO HAVENT SEEN TII GET GOEING NNOWWW**cat-minions bring straitjacket**
no,no Im ok **ev...ahem-SEMI-evil cat-minions shake heads disbelivingly**ok,okayy. I go find that guy in the white jaket now. bye!
**several assorted cat-minions wave to Ookami-chan "bye!"** |
Reviewed By: tayla On: March 09, 2003 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
GOD!!That was good!REEEAAAALLLLLLLLLLLY good.
You. Must. Update. |
Reviewed By: LUVED IT On: March 09, 2003 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS NKOT THE END!!!!!!!!!YA GOTTA MAKE MOOREEEEE! YA HEAR ME!!?!?!MOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Step of Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was sooo fucking good. I wish you could update. Is there going be an update? Well, I love it. It was soo good. Please tell me there's going to be an update. |
Reviewed By: wowee! On: March 10, 2003 00:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there! ^_^
Just wanted to drop by to say I absolutely LOVE this fic, already read it at iridescent dreams (one of my fav sites by the way) but one can never get enough of a good thing, ne?
You are so descriptive in your writing, and I just hope you intend to write another one-shot soon, and I say one-shot because I want to read the next chapter of TiFP! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Melneko On: March 11, 2003 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iloved it! I laughed so hard when Inuyasha got "busted"! I want to know what happens next, especially about the whole gold eyes thing. Please, please, please add more to it. Hell, update all your stories, I love all of them. You are by far my favorite fan fiction author. I can't get enough of your writings. Don't stop!! |
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