| "Dragonstone" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: coregium On: January 24, 2004 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I really think you should continue this story. I had read it before and kept checking back but you never updated. I usually don't do reviews unless I really like a story and it's neglected. Please write more. if you could please email me when or if you update. my email is gundam_obscure@yahoo.com....thnk!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 00:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well needless to say that I do not agree with the first reviewer...personally I don't believe you should throw stones if your not willing to write. As for the plot...it is a little slow but it's only the first chapter ne? I am actually very curious as to what happens, but I had hoped it would be yaoi...oh well such is life. Can't wait for you to continue~ |
Reviewed By: queixo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is the result of the Gundam characters being placed directly into another story with no real plot change except maybe the furry ears and tail of the main character. i was under the impression that these stories should have somewhat original plots. |
