| "Who Should I Choose?" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 12:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please write more! This is so exciting! They're many Yu Yu Hakusho Xovers out there, but not many of them are good. Yours is in the good list!
Will Hiei wake up again? I'm sure Kurama can bust the others out of there. |
Reviewed By: Setsuna On: May 23, 2003 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
you're style of writig is pretty good
spelling and grammar...you should do a little more editing
the story's great! lovethe idea of it and im enjoyin it so far!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue |
Reviewed By: Infidel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2003 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very unique and adorable!!!! My favorite bishounen from each anime series together!! Oh god this is brilliant and challenging pairing, I commend you for taking it on. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kewl! The moon of the Gundam Wing Universe makes Kurama horny, nice touch.
Who asked the question at the end of ch 7? |
Reviewed By: Kris On: April 22, 2003 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far as I can see the only thing that bugs me about this story is that so much can happen and it still seems to be going so very sloh-oh.
It's rather odd.
I'm not sure I like it.
But!, there is no way I am going to stop reading this story!! I like it a lot already.
When do we get to find out what Kurama and Hiei fought about and when Hiei actually decided he loved Kurama?
Can one of the guys fight Kurama? I'd like to see that happen! Especially if he won. (in my mind they're out of their suits when fighting him, so anything's possible.) Hey! Maybe Kurama and Trowa fight and that's when everything gets cleared up between them.
Speaking of which...
The question on *everybody's* mind: Why is Trowa really avoiding him?
I am sorry if my ramblings or suggestions offend you, I don't intend to do so. I was just hoping to be helpful and if for some reason you like one of those ideas, I'm glad!
-Kris |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I still think the G-boys tell Kurama things too easily, but other then that this fic is really nice. i like the way Kurama thinks. |
Reviewed By: sandfox On: April 10, 2003 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this is probably one of the best crossovers i have seen. usually crossovers make one show look better than the other or bash one of them, but you are fair to both shows and betray the characters well. even though my fav character is quatre and you dont show him that much, but i still read it. that says something. i love wufei too so its all good. ps sorry if i write alot and you dont want to read this but i just had to congraduate you |
Reviewed By: Faen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a really cool story. I've never seen a Wufei/Kurama pairing, it should be interesting. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So will the reat of the Spirit Detectives go to the Gundam universe too? |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 12:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting. you must post more asap this sound REALLY good so far.
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: logan On: April 02, 2003 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PRETTY GOOD SO FAR I JUST WISH THE CHAPTERS WEREN'T KIND OF SHORT AT LEAST TO ME ANYWAY. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aww, phooy. It's just a jealous Trowa. Have Kurama tell & show them he's a demon, their reaction should be really funny. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have a hard time believing that the G-boys would be so willing to trust Kurama. Does Trowa know what Kurama is? Update soon. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fic is hilarious! I keep laughing. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Brat On: March 22, 2003 04:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intresting concept. I am really enjoying the story. Can't wait for more. |
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