| "Hikari" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 09:54 CST
Comment/Review:
This looks interesting so far. I hope you add another chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: March 10, 2003 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It looks like things are heating up here! I hope that Yugi is okay, and it would be cool if he and that new girl hooked up. That would be sweet to read! I hope you update soon, because this story is good! Keep it up!
(P.S: I think Yugi is spelled with just one 'u', not two.) |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 08:46 CST
Comment/Review:
PP- How rude!!! /borrows Madyamisam's mallet and beats down Jou and Honda/
YPP- Pingpong to the rescue!!
PP- someone'll have ta come 2 ur rescue if you don't put a squeeze on your chu-box.
YPP- O_OU Meep. |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 04:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* Y were Joey and Tristen being so mean? Plz continue |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 15:32 CST
Comment/Review:
More! |
