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Title: Lving Hell
Reviewed By: Lidia On: December 11, 2004 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's incredible, it's.............. lets just say i haven't read a story this good in a long time, you really should write more. I can't wait to the the continuation from The truth about true love. Heero and Duo are my fav characters, but for some reason i like them to suffer, suffer before anything good happenes, i used to write stories like this, stories in which all the main characters died, leaving the other to suffer. I know i may sould sadistic, but... anyway, don't mind me, this story was GREAT! and i can hardly wait to see your next ones.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 02:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA!!! (Takes a step back) that was a great story!! thank you for sharing. I was so convinced that Zechs was bad, it was brillent to start the story from the perspective of Heero. For a moment I was so confused as to what was real as slivers truth were revealed to Heero's hazy mind. In the end I felt so sorry for him, he was so close to be at peace with himself and accepting the fact that Duo loved someone other than him. sigh, wallowing in his self imposed, Rena reinforced, horried hell. WOW!
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Reviewed By: Sailor Sun Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, good job. Wish I could write like this... looking forward to more of your work? |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2003 03:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Tricky. ^_^ I liked it. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Sun Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erm... fascinating...? *laughs* |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, and whats to happen next. Whats with Duo? |
Reviewed By: Aria On: March 23, 2003 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't let the other G-boys be hurt, you have to let them help Heero rescue Duo! And Zechs has to die and be gutted then thrown in a ditch! The guy is a total bastard! I want him to die! I had a feeling that that wasn't Duo that Heero saw.
I can't explain it, but that just didn't seem to follow the plot line you had set up. I hope you make this story a happy ending and that you give everyone what they want.
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Brat On: March 19, 2003 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intense. Can't wait for the update. |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 17:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Eeek! Meanie for leaving it hanging there... but I guess, technically, he's falling. Anywho, I'm having a difficult time imaging the mutants... the bed frame particularly is confusing... but it doesn't really matter much what they look like and I suppose I don't want to imagine what they look like. They're ugly and mean... that's enough info for me. |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 09:12 CST
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NO!!!!!!! poor hee-chan...Rena's with Zechs isnt she? shes just too mean to be other wise...and the zombie things dont attack her.
Shinigami smiles apon thee,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 03:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Well that's interestingly creepy! :)
Rena is disturbing, but in a good way.
I'm glad that Heero found Duo...but now what happens, right? |
Reviewed By: Aria On: March 15, 2003 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What are you going to do with Duo? Is he going to run away from Heero cause he is afraid to get hurt again? I bet that is what is going to happen
but you can't let it! Poor Duo-chan! Write again soon I want to find out what happens! |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 20:27 CST
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grrr... *whines* Why'd you have to stop there? ^_^ More please. |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 22:39 CST
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Hmmm.... Interesting! I like it! Continue, please. |
Reviewed By: madame_knight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know the game! I know the game!! Its one of my favorites!!! This is so awesome! I love how you are messhing the two together!! I can't wait until the next chapter! Please keep going and please update soon! |
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