| "Rei Ayanami: Fallen Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: ANUBIS On: July 29, 2003 05:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be honest, the angel rape part was totally unnecesarry, but the rest of the story was EXELENT !
I mean, it's the best fic I've ever read; you've got the stuff to be an author.
I'd like to ad that the fic wasn't a horror or angst one, but mearely a Romance and a Hentai one!
It's really enjoyable and an overall succes, regardless of what some retarded pricks, I saw wrote here, may say, it's great and I stand to it! |
Reviewed By: DIck On: July 28, 2003 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
We need more sicko like you instead of Bush. More!! |
Reviewed By: Popgun On: June 27, 2003 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not much enamoured of Rei's getting knobbed by that old roue Gendo, but that's an issue of personal taste, not literary merit. This is terribly lucid, marvellously wrongheaded and unsettlingly believable stuff. You do a good job. |
Reviewed By: thekillingmantra On: June 15, 2003 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The angel rape is the funniest shit ever... I was expecting this fic to be twisted but that is just funkin sick. But, it really is a good fic! Who would have thought, huh? |
Reviewed By: Saucy Jack On: June 06, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not exaggerating when I say that this story is the best work of Evangelion lemon fanfiction I have ever read.
Do not listen to all the idiots in the Evangelion fic community who say they want to see you suffer a horrible death - you have dropped a big-ass MOAB on those complacent, elitist bastards. They wouldn't attack you unless they thought that you were a threat to them.
Please carry on writing. Continue to be a cat amongst the pigeons. I want to see where u are going to take Rei and Gendo's relationship from here.
Expect to be a winner at the TakoBalls this year, my friend. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous Assasin On: April 17, 2003 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my fuckin god!!! You're the MAN!!!
Time to rape some bitch !! |
Reviewed By: Enrique On: April 14, 2003 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is it wrong 4 me 2 masturb8 over the sex parts in this story/ i hope my mom she doesnt catch me thatd be bad pls keep makign chps pece out |
Reviewed By: League of Jewish Skinheads On: April 11, 2003 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, I've rated you as best I can. 7 for style, which is smooth but utilitarian, a 9 because you're pretty thorough and an 8 because I've never seen anything like this in a public forum. As regards enjoyment...was this really written to be enjoyed? Still, it's difficult not to laugh at the protest you've managed to excite among the more slavish Evangelion fans and on that level I can certainly appreciate what you're doing. The League of Jewish Skinheads has no overall rating to offer, but try to look surprised if you're nominated for a Takoball Award this year. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous Assasin On: April 10, 2003 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo muthafucka, ya better update this shit realfast. This is like some dope to my sick head.
Now here did I put my Bible BlaCK series...... |
Reviewed By: [NPH] On: March 20, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It gets better and better. |
Reviewed By: Cavalier On: March 14, 2003 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, you rock! This is the most fucked up fanfic I have ever read (I mean that in a good way) and your writing style is great. I know your probably getting a load of flames for this fic, but just remember that everyone has their own definition of what a fanfic is, so as long as you think its a fanfic, and at least one person enjoys it, the things been a success. Keep up the scary work! |
Reviewed By: darkk_angel On: March 12, 2003 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome fanfic... do keep writing! the emotions which you have conveighed in this piece are shocking (in the best way possible) and please excuse my spelling:) |
Reviewed By: [NPH] On: March 12, 2003 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:monocle: |
Reviewed By: harvman85 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Sick, Disgusted, perverted and basically Wrong. I have read hundreds of fan fics, and i have never once before stopped reading a story in disgust. Based on your writing style i would have to say you have Severe psychological problems. I do not see this fic as a darkfic or angstie fic or even a romance fic. I see it as a very disturbed author writing down his sick, disgusting fantasies so the whole world can see how much of a clown he is. a fanfic is supposed to be a tribute to the article of media it was spawned from "ie: NGE" and you have made a mockery of the series and its fans and fanfic authors everywhere. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous Assasin On: March 16, 2003 09:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn.....this is the rapefic I am looking for years. Youre da MAN. Shit, this is better than any shitass hentai I ever watched. Screw those conservatives assholez. Those faggots can shove their 2cm dicks into a cow for all I care. And you.......write on!!!!! |
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