| "Rei Ayanami: Fallen Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: afgh On: May 01, 2005 01:14 CDT
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well, let me say I didnt know that the way the reviews work is completely different to fanfiction where u can review each chapter, instead I reviewed the story like 4 times now for one chapter each time! oh well, it was a good story
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Reviewed By: afgh On: May 01, 2005 01:01 CDT
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Wow, very intense chapter...I wish Rei didn't have to act like that...at least there's a very good storyline compared to if Gendo should fall to temptation
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Reviewed By: afgh On: May 01, 2005 00:55 CDT
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Well, that sounded very unlike Rei this entire story so far and to think that now Gendo is involved with this thing...I wanna stop but cannot...your writing skill compels me...damn you i say!
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Reviewed By: afgh On: May 01, 2005 00:46 CDT
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Still as impressive as before...very original...but maybe little too...unrealistic? Still great though
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Reviewed By: afgh On: May 01, 2005 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is written very well. No, it IS written very well. However I think the fact that a 14 year old girl lusting for a 40-50 year old man really disturbing....
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Title: Master of hentai
Reviewed By: EVA06GoneChaotic On: April 29, 2005 10:37 CDT
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Being 16 years old, I can appreciate this story in all ts aspects. However, Iam disturbed by one thing. Not the suicide northe sx. It is the primary fact that you seem to have taken many liberties with Rei. Also with Gendo. In this you made Rei out to be a true slut, Gendo our to be a womanizing, sick bastard. (What, he is). But the fact remains. This fic was interesting. Not serious enough for my tastes
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Title: Crimson's Henchman
Reviewed By: soul.assassin.547 On: October 12, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Devastating. Poetic. Sick factor very high. Powerful. Not for the kiddies. KISS THE WET FLOWER!
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Title: Crimson's Henchman
Reviewed By: soul.assassin.547 On: October 12, 2003 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Devastating. Poetic. Great use of descriptions. Not really for the kiddies. Kiss the wet flower!
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Reviewed By: Car-Car On: October 07, 2003 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are a really good writer please continue.Don't listen to the flamers I know a good fic when I see one and this is one of them.
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Reviewed By: ANUBIS On: July 29, 2003 05:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be honest, the angel rape part was totally unnecesarry, but the rest of the story was EXELENT !
I mean, it's the best fic I've ever read; you've got the stuff to be an author.
I'd like to ad that the fic wasn't a horror or angst one, but mearely a Romance and a Hentai one!
It's really enjoyable and an overall succes, regardless of what some retarded pricks, I saw wrote here, may say, it's great and I stand to it! |
Reviewed By: DIck On: July 28, 2003 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
We need more sicko like you instead of Bush. More!! |
Reviewed By: Popgun On: June 27, 2003 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not much enamoured of Rei's getting knobbed by that old roue Gendo, but that's an issue of personal taste, not literary merit. This is terribly lucid, marvellously wrongheaded and unsettlingly believable stuff. You do a good job. |
Reviewed By: thekillingmantra On: June 15, 2003 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The angel rape is the funniest shit ever... I was expecting this fic to be twisted but that is just funkin sick. But, it really is a good fic! Who would have thought, huh? |
Reviewed By: Saucy Jack On: June 06, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not exaggerating when I say that this story is the best work of Evangelion lemon fanfiction I have ever read.
Do not listen to all the idiots in the Evangelion fic community who say they want to see you suffer a horrible death - you have dropped a big-ass MOAB on those complacent, elitist bastards. They wouldn't attack you unless they thought that you were a threat to them.
Please carry on writing. Continue to be a cat amongst the pigeons. I want to see where u are going to take Rei and Gendo's relationship from here.
Expect to be a winner at the TakoBalls this year, my friend. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous Assasin On: April 17, 2003 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my fuckin god!!! You're the MAN!!!
Time to rape some bitch !! |
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