| "Shadows of The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Reviewed By: Valea On: January 20, 2004 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright im on the school computer now because mine is out of order again so i cant read the next chapter now and whatnot. But anywho this was full of adventure and deciving i give it too thumbs up! hehe...damn guy..just had to rat him out meanie but when i get the time i cant wait to see what they do for new management that willl be a real treat!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bastard! *hisses at him* but it was cool like a fool not to say anything is foolish. yay! see it always has to be his..what other kind of albinos area around with white hair at the time?! itsa happy thing i was digging it...*sighs somewhat content* Marik learning the trade of the thief..good stuff man..
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Reviewed By: The Red Wind On: January 10, 2004 19:18 CST
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The sweet gift of a child for a Bakura Itemri. Quite thrilling, is it not? I do hope Bakura will be able to keep anything from happening to Aria(I am prosuming this is Aria?) for as long as he is there.
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Reviewed By: The Red Wind On: January 01, 2004 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another enjoyable fiction away from your other current fiction - Hosile Takeover. And, for long story short, this too, was very well writen. I wish you luck, and no writer's block while you contine with it.
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO SHAME!!yay! its so good to see marik find some comfort, *smiles* glad for the update and the men kissy-kissy-ness! lol
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Title: Understanding.
Reviewed By: ImpishPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Bakura and Rayna. I understand how you feel right now I'm coughing blood.
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Title: Understanding.
Reviewed By: ImpishPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Bakura and Rayna. I understand how you feel right now I'm coughing blood.
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 22:13 CST
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Glad Marik coudl find comfort, its nice to see such a wonderfully nice side to Bakura and Rayna, it seems really sweet...if only he coudl take her away...i can only hope for the best! it was really sweet and im gald you updated ^-^
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Reviewed By: Impish_Pixie On: December 15, 2003 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there any more to this fic? My e-mailo is illewyn@hotmail.com . Thanks! You're the greatest!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 16:41 CDT
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Aw, poor Marik-chan, he's so heart-broken. And how could you let Yami-chan order something like that?! *sniffles* Yami-chan, my fave character of all times, causing heartache to my 3rd fave character...anyway, update soon!
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Reviewed By: xxallisonxx (too tired to log in :p) On: October 14, 2003 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! you updated. awwwwww poor Marik. Anubis is an ass that's why he dies twice XD. o.o bakura's a s.l.u.t omg. THE POOR BABY!!!DOES MARIK EVER FIND OUT IT DOESN'T DIE OH AND DOES ANYONE FIGURE OUT THAT SAME SON KILLED MARIK? did they have guns in egypt, cause in that fic your working on(wats it name? forget) you say teh was shot or something like that. I'M LIKE RUINING THE STORY 4 THAT PPL THAT DON'T KNOW. SOOOOOOOOO SRRY.--Ally Hearts
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Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!! i'm a strong believer in you should continue this story. ^-^ Wonders never stop. :P---Alli Hearts
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Reviewed By: Echidna On: August 22, 2003 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This goes down as one of only three stories that have ever made me cry. It's lovely.
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Reviewed By: Amani On: July 04, 2003 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really injoed this fic and hope for you to finish it soon poor Ryou-kun thought well happy writeing.
Amani^-~ |
Reviewed By: leila15rose On: July 02, 2003 19:29 CDT
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Mabe once you've finished "Anything for You," can finish this one! If not, well... that's okay... it IS your choice after all... But if you do work mre on this, I'd love it!! But only after "Anything for You" is done. :D |
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