| "The Weakling" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: S.D. On: September 25, 2004 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks really good. Please continue. Spirit Dragon
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 14:12 CST
Comment/Review:
this fic looks very promising. i cannot wait to see what you have planned. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Chris On: June 28, 2003 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay this is really good so far has promise about time Bulma got to kick some butt. Please finish this its really a good plot. |
Reviewed By: The Ouiji's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story. I love that fact that Bulma is a saiyan...that's one of my favorite plots. Pleeez continue, and so on. Oh, also, if you know any authors lookin for a beta-reader, please refer me.
Sincerely,
Manda~~~ |
Reviewed By: Chris On: April 03, 2003 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hay its great so far its time someone wrote a fan fic like this one keep it up and I hope you finish it. |
Reviewed By: catgokuh On: March 26, 2003 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the bulma as a saiyan idea
and that she gets to kick butt !!!
also vegeta's reaction will be priceless i'm sure
so please keep writing
i'm dying to find out what happens |
Reviewed By: luceiia On: March 11, 2003 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! this is totally awesome! i love the whole idea. it's great, everything about it. i really hope you continue with it! i can't wait to see how bulma takes piccolo's training! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOONNNNNN!!! I LIKE IT I DOOOOOO!
YUP YUPPP! Lets show HIM!!! Bulma ! U GO GIRL!!!
Piccolo is training her oy thats a toughie ,He green and mean He's coach Piccolo oh boy ! she's in a lot of trouble but hell its worth it!!
PLEASE CONTINUE I CANT WAITTT!
Later!! |
