| "As Heaven is Wide" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: I like it
Reviewed By: DamnBlackHeart On: June 30, 2005 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit that your story is pretty awesome. I want you to continue writing this story because I'm looking forward to the next chapters of it. I give your story a 10 because it enjoyable to read. At some parts I was laughing especially when the girls decided to use the BMW. Watching Resident Evil and Yu Yu Hakusho defiantly gave you a creative story. It's very interesting to me. This is just mine opinion but I really like your story. I believe you have great potential So, please keep writing. ^_^
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Reviewed By: teardrops2m On: November 14, 2004 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Its funny and fun to read. Please do us all a favor and write more of it.
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Reviewed By: the_friendly_void On: August 02, 2003 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Great fic. Tatsu and Yusuke will certainly fight royally if they ever meet. Nice story, it has got great potential. Now that you have your 5 required reveiws, you have no excuse to delay writing the next chapter to this fic. Good luck! |
Reviewed By: Broken Angel On: April 11, 2003 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write more. Write more. Write more. Write more. Write more. Write more. Write more. Write more. Write more. Write more. Write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I would have given you a 100 on the enjoyment factor, but the stupid rating thingy only goes to 10. |
Reviewed By: keeter On: March 19, 2003 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, keep going, please?
Here's a cookie!:) |
Reviewed By: pure drivel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yo! What's goin' on?
Teehee.
I liked the zombie sqaushen part.
Write more, I have to know what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Lillian On: March 13, 2003 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. You seem to keep Kurama and Hiei in character. Even Tatsu and Miyuki seem real. Not like Mary-Sues >_ |
