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| "Butterfly" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] | Title: If you don't like it then don't read idiots!
Reviewed By: bloody_black_valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I happen to like sess&inu & i u dont i dont give a shit! but stop harassing the preson who wrote it. if ya dont like it dont read it god! by the way i thought u did a GREAT job & as 4 u othr ppl, wat if u decided 2 make a fanfic & ppl said it sucked & was gross & stupid, how would u like 2 b put down 4 sumthing u worked on? idiots, u need 2 learn respect god! i think the higher the # the better rite? cus YES it CAN b the other way around but 4 me the higher the better ^^ ha ha, tht sounds funny, like the only thing better then being high, is too b higher xD i dun no drugs thou but sugar & caffine yumm! also ya did say it would b a sess&inu fic w/ Kagome bashing! (ps: I h8 Kagome, lol & when ya write her nameshort it looks like fag xD sry, i no it's mean 2 darker skinnned ppl but i nvr called anyone tht & 4 SURE i aint racist xP, racist suck)
| Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: September 16, 2005 12:04 CDT
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this sucks. I couldn't understand a thing! Sess-Inu is gross (I'm alright with yaoi, but INCEST?!? You sicko!), and if yuo don't like Kagome, that's no reason to make her a slut, Who the hell is Akago, or whatever his name was? Dating? Inuyasha, from what I've heard about the manga, doesn't know what dating is. So overall, this is lame and moronic.
| Title: Lyris
Reviewed By: Wannabe Writer On: June 03, 2005 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ABSOLUTELY HATE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: buffaholic On: July 15, 2004 01:48 CDT
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OK! yes i know, this is very screwed up and im disturbed and everything but... you have free will and all that shit so everyone should just shut up with their complaining. and IF you have a reeeeally strong need to complain it better be that you're upset that inyasha and kagome aren't together!! you psychotics that kag and sess aren't together and sum weird bullshit...SHUT THE HELL UP! i honestly think its weird enough taht people don't like inu and kag together but if someone wants to write a story about something different..then let em! and once again, if you're not complaining that inu and kag should be together than just stop!
| Reviewed By: anime_angel123 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 09:02 CST
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Don't listen to Fluffy's mate! She does have a good point, but I LIKE THIS FIC! I know it's a little O_o, but I can't start a nice story without finishing it! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Fluffys mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 17:16 CST
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WHY WOULD U DO THIS!! U MIGHT NOT LIKE KAGOME, PERSONALLY, I DONT EITHER, BUT Y WOULD U MAKE FLUFFY GO WITH *SHUDDER* INUYASHA..OR ANY OTHER GUY FOR THAT MATTER!! EWW...STRAIGHT UP SICK..! *cries* poor fluffy, what have they done to u???
| Title: Update
Reviewed By: anime_angel123 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 14:28 CDT
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I like this fic and yes, I do know I have a twisted mind. LOL. Update, dude! | Reviewed By: Joe Diamonds On: September 08, 2003 21:25 CDT
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HI!=)YOU TOTTALLY ROYALLY SUCK HARD!!!=)
It's not the fic...it's you. I hope we can be friends, bitch. Your friend the kag/sess lover.
P.S. : YOU MADAM,...ARE SICK!!! | Reviewed By: Kiona On: July 24, 2003 19:59 CDT
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good fic so far...hehe i learned new words today*cheers*
heh any way this a good pairing i LIKE yaoi and
me no like Kagome waaaaaheyyyyy to many kag/inu fic
on the web if ya ask me. welp update k? Ja ne.
P.S. lightin up on the Japanesee. an if i misspelled
the bitches name don't hold it agenst(sp?)me | Reviewed By: Kayko Ishuzu On: June 10, 2003 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's probably gonna be annoying if a reader sees a japanese phrase they don't comprehend, and having to scroll all the way down to the translation to only scroll back up to their current place. Don't use so many Japanese in your story. We really are impressed with your knowledge of Japansese but, really no use to use two languages in your story.
Like one of the past reader said, I couldn't understand much. They are really OOC, but I guess that's how you wanted it. Though the reason of you disliking Kagome doesn't really cover it.
One more thing is that you rushed way too much. Take your time and read it over and correct the mistakes. Put more details and elaborate on things. Please don't take this is as a flame, and don't whine about it. Take into consideration the advice you're given.
Break the paragraghps also, it's pretty hard to read. I don't know whether you wanted it that way or not, so I'm not going to comtemplate much on this.
Again, so don't take this as flame. I'm not trying to insult you here.
Bye.
One more thing, it's spelt Sesshoumaru | Reviewed By: Nkoah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 02:03 CDT
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Here are the mistakes in your Japanese:
) Doko de: where
Just doko is "where"
3) ijiwarui: evil
Almost correct...it means "bad natured"
8) nani no nai: nothing
Nothing is "nani mo"
9) iji ga warui: viciously
All you did was add the particle "ga" to "bad natured"
11) namae: named
Namae just means "name"
17) Doyatte: How
There is no "doyatte"
18) no ue de: on
Ok...'no' shows possession, 'ue' means 'above' and 'de' means 'by means of'...ooooook...
19) damasu: cheating
This one isn't really wrong...it really means 'trickery'
21) to issho ni: with
'To' does mean 'and', but this would sound somewhat awkward... "issho" alone means 'together'...so, it's more used for something like "issho ni suupa he ikimasho ka?" (Shall we go to the Supermarket together?) yadda yadda.
26) Myoga: the day after
This is wrong.
29) Jaken: a little; or some
I have never heard of Jaken before...
I'm not trying to be a bitch or anything...but some of these are just so wrong.
Besides...why try to write so much of the story in Japanese when the people who don't speak it (or when it isn't correct Japanese) won't be able to enjoy it? This is an English story -- therefore, it should probably be ALL English. | Reviewed By: Tobe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2003 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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Ok, here's the thing: I didn't really understand half of what you wrote in that story; even though you put the Jap. translations at the end, it didn't help me any while I was in the process of reading it. I was totally in the dark. Anyway I'm liking the story but I just think that you should get rid of the Jap lines all together or just use the most common Jap words that are in most stories and everyone knows.
Tobe |
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