| "cheeky prince charming" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! I loved it soooooo much! I can't wait to read more of it so UPDATE VERY SOON! I love it and really enjoyed reading it! Great idea you've got here and I'm glad that you put it up on the internet for everyone to read!!!!! Keep it up! b-chan2007 ^_^
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Reviewed By: andychan11 On: February 11, 2004 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i loved this sooooooooooooo much but u havent updated in ever update i need more!!!!!!!loved this story!!!!
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Reviewed By: BlitzAce123 On: November 22, 2003 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic totally kicks ass (pardon me french, lol). FINALLY! A DBZ-based story that doesn't follow the same basic pattern as all the others!I think you two have used so much genius and inginuity in this story. I especially like Vegeta's "nicknames" for frieza! lol! Vegeta is still a bad boy, without the evil. Excellent. And goku is bit too stupid. i sugest taking the lack of intellect down a few knotches. Although, I think you guys should focus yostory a bit more on goku/chi-chi and R/V Plus, give nappa a g/f! I'm sure the old guy wants some action, too! (We dont want him ending up like master roshi, now do we? lol!) Also, i would like to see some V/B and/or G/C lemons. Afterall, this is conidered a hentai class story. Anyway, this is an excellent story. Its a new story without changing the general 'backbone' of the series. So, bravo and congrulations on this great fic! keep up the good work, i know I won't be disappointed! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Princess Star Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 05:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
It goes straight to Chapter 1. |
Reviewed By: Jako On: July 07, 2003 11:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
If you don't update soon, I'll come to your house and slice your head off. ^_^ HAHA! Just kidding but if you DONT update soon I'll bombard you with lots of flames!!!!!! muahahahaha!!!!! which means UPDATE SOON I LOVE THE FIC! |
Reviewed By: Sailor J-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! Sorry I"ve been gone for so long! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Sakura no Hime On: June 28, 2003 23:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! I wonder what is going to happen next! Please keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Sakura no Hime On: June 23, 2003 10:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is soooooo great! Please keep wrightin' |
Reviewed By: Sakura no Hime On: June 23, 2003 10:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is soooooo great! Please keep wrightin' |
Reviewed By: Sakura no Hime On: June 20, 2003 23:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
It is good so far. Please keep goin'! |
Reviewed By: Side On: June 07, 2003 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Good... |
Reviewed By: Sailor J-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2003 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are evil, leaving us with a cliffie! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Sailor J-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Sailor J-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait to see destruction, and laugh! |
Reviewed By: Sailor J-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 10:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Can't wait to see more! |
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