Reviewed By: Hime Hinata [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sytle of writing: 8/10. I like it. Although I think that the details in this story could've been a tad bit more clear in parts, overall, I find it be quite pleasing
Spelling and Grammer: 10/10. Congratulations! You have mastered the art that so many have not - spelling and grammer! I didn't see a single error! Yeah!
Originality/Creativity: 10/10. I don't think anyone would've thought up this idea. And I don't think there will ever be another like it.
Enjoyment Factor: 8/10. I think that this is more of a pensive story, than the kind that you are supposed to read to "enjoy" them. This story is extremly well written, but I must say that the fact that there isn't a main character from the series in it, it wasn't as good as it could've been. But then again, how do you work in a main character to this kind of a story?
Overall Rating: 9/10. Overall, I like the idea. The writing is good. The grammer and spelling are incredible. The idea astouding. And a damn pensive piece of work. GOod job!
Hime Hinata
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