Reviewed By: Hime Hinata [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of Writing: 8/10. I like most of it. It gets a bit confusing here and there. And I think I saw a tense change once or twice. Other than that, its good!
Spelling & Grammar: 8/10. ^---See above for tense changes...
Originality/Creativity: 10/10. I love it. I was shocked by the last line. I never would've thought that sort of thing about Saionji. I also like how you describe the details. And the 3rd person view for Saionji. Its a very beautiful style of writing.
Enjoyment Factor: 10/10. I LOVE IT.
Overall Rating: 9/10. I couldn't think of what to do for this, so I just averaged the scores together. Lazy lil' ol' me. :p
Hime Hinata
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