| "A Change of Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: SMOOTHER_DEN_USUALL On: November 22, 2004 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vary Vary Vary smooth lol u got a mad story mate :)
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 23:48 CST
Comment/Review:
This was sweet. You should really finish sometime. One critique though. There is NO WAY that 4 GUYS in a pool hall would EVER order those wuss drinks. They would share a pitcher of beer or maybe mix rum and coke. However, Daquiris, margaritas, and Pina Coladas are girls drinks that are only drunk by men on tropical beaches and bars in New Orleans.
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Reviewed By: leelee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is a great story so far u should really finish.
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Reviewed By: SaiyanzAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely written ^_^
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