| "The Look of Fear" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: NOOOO
Reviewed By: WolfBite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO You stopped! I was getting into it! I thought that there was a few more chapters! I should pay closer attention to detail! *Begins to tear up* ADD MORE SOON!!!!! PWEASE!!!!!! *Wolf pup eyes* ^_^ I would REALLY appreciate it! And if you have e-mailed me, I'm sorry but I haven't looked at my mail yet because I have been sick and in bed! But I'll look tonight, I'm in school right now so I will be going but I will read more stories! DAMN THE TEACHERS!!!!
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Reviewed By: i agree On: October 03, 2004 18:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
that's what i was thinking. it really hasn't progressed any which is sad because it's a pretty good beginning.
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 22:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know, unless you actually update, the story cannot progress. Please update soon, the start of this story is a great hook!
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Reviewed By: Kilala On: April 18, 2003 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please write more, where are you, I know you have not fallen off the face of the Earth. Please write more.
Kilala :P |
Reviewed By: Kilala On: April 12, 2003 16:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love past romances, avendtures, and mysteries combined in one I just wanted to see what you were working on instead of A New Face see I have read all your other stories and My fav is lust at first sight its really lemony I luv tht I relly like lifes a Bitch too and a new face but you just stopped for a while, so I wanted to see what your working onand its brilliant. The words are old fashioned I thought n one liked those kind of stories with wenches, taverns, moors, with Earls and Marques,and Countesses that kind of stuff keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Masaio [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this intro alot, it looks pretty interesting and the medieval fantasy thing is cool. Write more soon and don't forget the lemon ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on, come on, Kat, write more!!! *lol* The suspense, oh, the gripping suspense. ^_~
You should write a summary too, so that we might have some idea what will be coming.
I'm intrigued so far. Not bad for a teensy weensy prologue. Who's the girl? What's she doing alone? And who's the guy with the sword?? Does the girl have a sword!? *drools* Swords.... *strokes her sword collection* What's it about shiny, sharp objects that is such a turn on? O.o
Write more! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: XOR_ADNAMA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey.. totally awesome sofar.. interesting and im interested in where this is going.. but if you want more/better responses then you should write more.. ya didnt give us much ta work with=)
XOR_ADNAMA |
