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| "Slave Saiyans and an Ally" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Trunks Lover On: May 07, 2003 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Please update soon. I want to read more, don't leave me in suspense. | Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: May 03, 2003 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a REALLY good fic. A few errors, but really, really good. Do you have a BETA reader, or someone who edits your work for you? You might want to look into that, but anyways, I'll be looking for an update soon, so don't dissapoint me, okay?
Koaitan Princess | Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: May 03, 2003 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great fic!!! I'm waiting to read more, so update soon, okay? = ). And just to warn you ahead of time, I'm impatient, and have a bit of a temper. I told my friend Koaitan Princess about your fic, so, you should be getting a review from her anytime now, oh, and she'll probably be appoligizeing (oops, spelt wrong) for me alot. Looking forward to an update.
Saiyan Princess |
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