| "Changes 'Till The End" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: anex On: May 15, 2003 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the best lemon i've read so far you should write more it wasen't all nasty it was sweet and romantic the best! if you have any more e-mail me at I_love_Inuyasha@go.com
samantha thank you |
Reviewed By: nom On: April 06, 2003 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not very OOC. Your writing is fine. Hey, have you ever thought of downloading episodes of Inuyasha from KaZaA? It's great!!! I have 105 episodes!!! Just to warn you, episode 48 is very, very sad!!!! Anyways, keep writing!! |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 On: March 29, 2003 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story...its the first one that I have seen finished so far...(I'm reading so many story's its hard to keep trak)I hope a see another story from you soon |
Reviewed By: dxgirly2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story!!!! It was so satisfying to read something that actually had an end!! lol...I don't know if I'll ever be able to get to one in mine...anyways...I loved the way you tied everything up at the end. It was kinda sad that Kagome had to leave her family behind...but it's so true the way you portrayed her mom's reaction...lol. Make sure you keep on writing, you have some great ideas, especially because they're all spure of the moment type things! Again, great job!! I loved it!
oh...and just a little comment to another reviewer's thought...Naraku is, in fact, a hanyou. That's why he wants the jewel, to become a full demon (hehe...such a similarity to Inuyasha...foils are lovely things...) I believe they state this in the episode where Naraku captures Kikyou, and she says she knows that he is Onigumo, and that he is still just a half-demon... so.... uh.... yeah... ok... thats all... hehe |
Reviewed By: kagome1021 On: March 28, 2003 20:18 CST
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great story |
Reviewed By: Mio On: March 22, 2003 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Awesome!! I loved it! And your lemons were very good! |
Reviewed By: Ice On: March 22, 2003 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you wrote a very enjoyable and well writen fic. Great story. |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 16:04 CST
Comment/Review:
This was really a great story! Your first lemon? Pretty damn good, I have to say!!!
Of course, with every complimenting reviews comes the downsides, if any. Consider it helpful advice for your next story that I will DEFINATELY read:
-I am a bit confused with Kouga's jewel shards and agree with that one reader who reviewed and questioned how Kagome got them.
-I recall you calling Naraku a "hanyou" in the final battle chapter, when he's actually a pure demon (or at least I suppose he is, I know he WAS a human that was devoured by demons and...oh, you get the idea!), and that's called a "youkai". He's not a half demon...which is what "hanyou" is.
-I see from the last few chapters that you must have wanted to end the story soon, because they weren't as well thought out and written as your other chapters and the plots weren't that great. Naraku died rather quickly, and the battle was fairly short. Two years have passed, and everything in the end just happened so fast!
-Erm...though I'm somewhat confused with the whole "being in heat" thing, and how I thought that it's kinda hard to get pregnant during your period because at this time the eggs are actually being destroyed by your body, and with...whatever!!! ^_^;; Biology was never a favorite subject of mine, so I never really payed all that much attention and just did what I needed to do in order to pass...*sweatdrops* I don't know how it works for dogs, but from what I know I didn't think humans worked the same way with getting pregnant during your period or whatever. WHATEVER!!! Eh, it confuses me...*cries!!* lol...
All in all, like stated before, I really, REALLY enjoyed this story!!! I can see that you put a lot of effort into it, and you should be very proud of yourself. I'm actually a "newbie" to Inu-Yasha, as some would say, and have seen very little episodes and try to keep up with reading the Graphic Novels (Manga) that come out, but unfortuantely they don't translate the manga to english and make them hit the bookstores fast enough to keep up with the episodes. Oh well...
Like another reviewer stated, try getting a beta reader and using spellcheck, but besides that, I think you're doing great!!! Keep up the good work and I hope to see more stories posted by you soon!!!
Until then!! Ja Matta Ne!!! ^_^
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: I'd be very happy if you'd read my one-shot lemon fiction between Inu-Yasha and Kagome, it's my first Inu-Yasha story ever!!! ^_^ Review too, please!!! Thanks!!! =D |
Reviewed By: Shadow On: March 19, 2003 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
......Very good story......
"... Beware of the darkness ..No.. Beware of the demons ..No.. Beware of Shadow ... "
~Schala's warning~
"... When the moon gows black his seal will weaken and... HE wil break free.... Shadow... Beware.."
~Schala's prophecy~ |
Reviewed By: inuyoukai2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 07:26 CST
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I loved this story! You didn't put in lemon parts to be perverted like other authors. I respect that. I'd love to read more from you. |
Reviewed By: Bob Villa On: March 17, 2003 22:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Good story but you seemed to have forgotten about Kouga and his shards. How did Kagome get those Jewels and what was going to be Kouga's next plan to get Kagome? |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 17:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey
I like the story but Inuyasha seems to act close to Vegeta calling Kagome a b**ch. The other thing fits but I don't think he would call her that unless you have the anime thats uncut and un editted. I could be wrong just trying to help. Sorry this is nio meant to be a flame if it sounds like one. I do like the story and will continue reading. |
Reviewed By: kid On: March 17, 2003 15:36 CST
Comment/Review:
good so far |
Reviewed By: shiningwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more |
Reviewed By: kangel On: March 15, 2003 16:48 CST
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i love this story so far update so soon i just want to sat ur a great writer so keep on writing!!!!!!!!! |
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