"Changes 'Till The End" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 19:27 CST Comment/Review: *sweatdrops* when I said, "I wouldn't want them going to the cave and then getting attacked because of Kagome's heat," I meant that I wouldn't want anOTHER demon to show up, try mating with her, and then a huge fight ensues where Inu kicks the demons sorry ass!! I didn't mean Inu, because he doesn't seem like he would do attack her. Sorry if I confused you; I confuse myself sometimes. O.o |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 19:23 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: A promise of an update everyday? You shouldn't. Or us adoring fans may pounce you if you don't update. *lol* j/k ^.~
I'm liking this a lot so far. I mean... he's horney without being comPLETEly lustful. Me likes.
*snickers* Can't wait to find out what (if anything) will happen in the next chapter. I mean, I wouldn't want them going to the cave and then getting attacked because of Kagome's heat. And don't forget to Miroku and Sango. Write more!!!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: March 13, 2003 14:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: please this is a good fan fic update soon so the people can see what happens next :) |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 10:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: you write better then me...please update again soon so I can see what happens next |
Reviewed By: Keamaru On: March 13, 2003 08:37 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's a great fanfic and i can't wait to read the next chapter |
Reviewed By: demon On: March 13, 2003 08:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey i think this is going to be a good fanfic so keep writing anf please hurry a.s.a.p to finish it @_@ |
Reviewed By: kangel On: March 16, 2003 10:58 CST Comment/Review: great story keep writing!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: DreamStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 11:23 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YOU MOST LIKELY ALREADY KNOW THAT YOUR SORRY IS GREAT. i HOPE THAT MORE INUYASHA/KAGOME LEMONS ARE IN IT. ALSO I BELIEVE THAT SHIPPO IS LIKE INUYASHA/KAGOME'S SON IN A WAY. JUST SOME OF MY THOUGHTS ON THAT. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I LOVE THIS FIC.. |
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