| "Undying Light" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaneda-Shotaro and Yami Tetsuo On: March 24, 2003 06:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kaneda: Want more!
Yami tetsuo: T_T! Poor Joey-chan!
Kaneda: Duke must die!!!
Yami Tetsuo: REALLY!! |
Reviewed By: Lee On: March 22, 2003 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOO! Poor Joey! (::looks slightly downcast:: Although I had him kidnapped and raped in my story to eh heh heh -_-;) Anyway, update soon! This is great, I love Jou angst and Seto/Jou pairings! ^_~
~Lee |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 08:45 CST
Comment/Review:
EEEEPPP!!! That ROCKED!!! Bad, Bad Otogi! *smacks Otogi with lava lamp*
Update soon!! OR ELSE!!! |
Reviewed By: Tran On: March 14, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is BEST Fanfic I ever Read!! UPDATE!!! lol Take your time.. |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: March 13, 2003 16:27 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATENESS MUST HAPPEN SOONER THAN LATER! PLEASE! Thanx! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
OH!! You're here! Yippee!! So get on with it already!! *snicker* Where's the next chapter? Someone pass the lemons!! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good Gralnak. really good.
One suggestion is you have a long string of quotes one after another in chappie 6. Every once in a while interrupt those strongs with who is talking. This is a really good fic!!!!
*hands seto plushies* |
Reviewed By: Kaneda-Shotaro and Yami Tetsuo On: March 23, 2003 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kaneda: YES! ANother chapter!
Yami Tetsuo: DUKE IS GOING TO DIE!
Kaneda: Seto should kill hiM!!!
Yami Tetsuo: uh-oh Tea! Ah! |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 08:32 CST
Comment/Review:
You and your cliffhangers!! GGGRRR!!! I can't believe you're doing this to me!! Don't get mad you say...and then you do this?!?! Evil!! *breaks down crying* |
Reviewed By: Ashley On: March 16, 2003 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do love Seto x Joey so much, but(this is constructive criticism) maybe you should work on your grammer and spelling. Use spellcheck before you download this. It's a good fic overall, just work on your style of writing and such.
And, you better put the lemon in or I'll go nuts!! >_ |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: May 20, 2003 01:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow... OMG..I can't believe you wrote that.. it was good. It was really sad. ;_;I've never seen a fic deal with this before... You rock! Ja ne! |
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