| "Sweet Pain, Hard Love" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Ichiro-chan On: February 14, 2004 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! I wish you would write a sequel, it'd be interesting to see what happens!
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Title: Panting like space-mad!
Reviewed By: J. Mikoni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Enjoyment Factor and Overall rating are too small! I give this a 20 out of 10! I love it so much. Too bad ya can't upload background music, 'cause I think "Weak and Powerless" (by A Perfect Circle) would perfectly fit this... Cell... Perfection... It was all unintended! It was a coincidence, I sware!!
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Reviewed By: Fedishi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not quite how I imagined those two would get together, But I liked it! A lot! I didn't notice any spelling or gramatical errors, which is a good thing because when I see them they always disrupt the flow of the story for me.
Hey... um, do you take requests? You see, I love the couple super buu/gohan, but I can't find one of them anywhere. After reading this fic, and your cell/freiza fic, I think you could come up with a very good fic about them. Just a little suggestion.
Bravo, and keep up the good work!
Bubi |
Reviewed By: Mac On: March 17, 2003 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW! Cell's in love!Can't.Fight.Off.Massive...GRIN! ^_____________^ HEE!I loved it! Your writing style is awesome! I enjoyed this immensely! *sigh* if only I could put the rating higher! I need more! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! I WANT! * has a fit on the floor* |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 04:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
::twitch twitch:: My brain hurts...
...Even more so because it WAS erotic, damn you! Damn you damn you damn you!
Don't stop... ::cough:: |
Reviewed By: skulk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, I thought I was gonna be the only review, this is awesome! TY TY TY Kaia! ~_^ I would beg for a sequel, but you already did enough with this. ^__________________^ |
Reviewed By: Arashi no Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 11:18 CST
Comment/Review:
O_O
oh my goodness. i approached this fic with caution...i wasnt sure how you were going to pull this off. but damn. you did. and i very much enjoyed the entire process.
my GAWD, it was very well done. i just cant say that enough. i love your style, your grammatical correctness and the entire IDEA. if you ever decide to write more on it...know that i will definitely read it.
~deb |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 10:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMNIT! WHY DOES THE RATING ONLY GO UP TO 10?! HOW UNFAIR!!
anyway, this was VERY good ^_^ Piccolo tamed the wild beast... heh heh heh
go u!
cant wait to see what u come up with next!! |
