| "Though Time and Space Separate Us..." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: your story
Reviewed By: warbringer67 On: April 28, 2005 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think your story is quite good it just needs some thinking bout Van would not say YES to an aranged marridge but i think it is good and hurry up with the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay what next?!!!??! You have to write more and let us know how Van gets out of his marriage and such because life would just not be cool to have them reunited and then seperated again, that would be so mean. Any way please write more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: neo__X On: November 18, 2003 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was excellent better than most movies i have seeen
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Angel On: August 01, 2003 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such an interesting story i can't believe hardly anyone review this. please dont get discouraged, continued on updating thsi kool story |
Reviewed By: crystal On: March 13, 2003 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very iteresting please cotinue also very good story |
