| "Second Chances" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 14:59 CDT
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Is this a Sango and Inuyasha fic and A Miroku and Kagome fic? If it is I suppose I could say that it is done good, but that's all I'm saying and I'm not one to judge. I may in fact came back to this fic and maybe with different feelings for the show/manga. Well good luck on your fic!^.~Brat
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lo! hehe, this is good so far! unfortunately, i cant read all of it just yet, im on chapter 10, just finished 9. im like sooooo sleepy! eek! eheh....wellz, ne ways, i think this is a brilliant! another song i think mite git this is Freckles from kenshin...yup...well, good job n i will read the rest asap! hugs n kisses n lollies! Ai-Lani
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 07:45 CDT
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*glomps* Everything ended perfectly ^^ I felt really bad for poor Miroku...he had to experience so much pain! I'm also glad to see that Sango and Inuyasha made it together at the end ^^
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Title: Do me a Big FAVOR!!!
Reviewed By: Inugome Kayasha On: October 20, 2003 05:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE I AM BEGGING YOU AND I USUALLY DONT BEG....PLEASE DONT MAKE INUYASHA AND SANGO GET TOGETHER!!!! I DONT KNOW WHY BUT I CANT STAND 2 SEE THEM TOGETHER!NOW KOUGA AND SANGO I CAN CONNECT!LOL JUST PWEESE MAKE IT A HAPPY ENDING WITHOUT SANGO AND MY INU BABY GETTING TOGETHER...I LOVE ME SOME SANGO BUT ....IDK ITS JUST NOT RIGHT!i REALLY ENJOYED YOUR FIC BUT AS IT WENT ON I KEPT ON THINKING HES GONNA GET WITH SANGO NOOO!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome421230 On: July 20, 2003 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINISH IT PLZ!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 21:07 CDT
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I'm so glad you updated ^^ I feel so bad for Miroku >( But I can understand how poor Kagome could be led to believe that he was using her...after all she's been through. And now...his heart will probably break even more! *cries* Ahh I can't wait until you update this, I really want to know what happens! |
Reviewed By: Larania [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 19:13 CDT
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*giggles evilly* Angst, angst! Miscommunication, the bane of relationships! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 22:43 CDT
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Great work! I read this and the one that came before it, and I have enjoyed both very much! I hope Kagome stays far, far, far away from Inuyasha! (^_^) |
Reviewed By: P-chanPowers On: April 10, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let the readers know what's going to be happening in the story. Is Inu-yasha gonna get together with Kagome or Sango or no one? I don't want to waste me time reading something that in the end that I won't have enjoyed and wasted time reading when I could have been reading note worthy fics instead of this story. |
Reviewed By: Larania On: April 09, 2003 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sincerely enjoyed this- I love alternate pairings fics. They are usually more difficult to write, therefore take more effort and are more fun to read. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you give me your address i will send you a BIG box of chocolate and peanut butter candy bars!!!!!
but you have to finish the story first. if you don't
i won't send them to you!!!!!1 ^_~ |
Reviewed By: KenYasha On: March 21, 2003 04:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great story! I am so glad that this is not the typical IY story, and although I am a fan of the IY/Kag couple, I find the idea of Inuyasha and Sango becoming a couple, very very interesting ... Please do continue soon, I am so looking forward to it! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Cosmos On: March 14, 2003 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great so far! I'm not a fan of Mir/Kag, usually Inu/Kag, but this is quite a good story. Ooh, and since I didn't review the first one, I'd like to say that was great too. Keep up the hard work and get out another chapter! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really happy that you did decide to continue this. :) Loved the descriptions at the beginning of the story too. And I like that the title has multiple meanings. Let the readers make their own interpretations for awhile. ^_~
*roflmfao* Miroku... karma, babe, karma. ^.^
And let me guess ... Inuyasha is going to look for Sango? What's he gonna do, go convince her to try and seduce Miroku (j/k) or that they should try and make them jealous? *lol* OH, the possibilities.
Write more! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CLIFF HANGER!?!?!?! NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
I HATE CLIFF HANGERS!!!!!! YOU ARE EVIL!!!!!!!!
PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!!!!
WHO WAS SHE DREAMING ABOUT ANY WAY?!?!?!
P.s Please read my story "Kooraru" |
