| "One Step Closer" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know, I kinda wish he had just snapped her neck and put everyone out of their misery. It's good though, I like it. Nice job
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was waiting for Goku to KILL ChiChi right there! I absolutly LOVED it! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: bandit-gurl42 On: April 16, 2003 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a great story. Personally I despise Chichi. All she ever does is whine, bith and moan. Her husbands savin the world and all she cares is that he gets a job. She just yells at him. You wrote exactly what i was thinking. Thank you -_-. And it was really good nyaa ^^^^ |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 08:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool!!!! That fic was so great. OMG and adding a song from LP made so much better too. Your awsome dude, you should right more. |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 06:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice...I read this on Adult FF.Net, but then I saw it here as well.
I hope you do another chapter on this one.
Waiting........................................................................................... |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shut up, Ouji-sama!!!!! ROFL!
What's with the Ouji-sama Gokou-controlling comments lately? Ride me, Shut up... what's next??? LOL!
Delicious.... mmmm... anti-Chichi... gotta love it! Details were just creamy-goodness! ^_^ Kill the bitch and get it over with! Muwahahahahaha!!!!!
*collapses in giggles* |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was beautafull and i loved it |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O
Holy flaiming cat hair Batman!! that was EXCELLENT!!!
I loved the voices in his head thingy... Fit the situation perfectly ^_^
GENIUS!
PURE GENIUS I TELL YOU!
write another one soon! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, VERY nice!! I enjoyed this fanficcy very much! Your writing talent is excellent and I hope to see more from you :) Great job! |
Reviewed By: Lully On: March 14, 2003 09:19 CST
Comment/Review:
It's funny. Some people are adamant that Vegeta is either uke or seme...thinking he must be one or the other. I can see both but it all depends on the way it is depicted. Being on top seems to fit his personality. I thought the voices in head was nice touch. Enjoyed! |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 07:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow that was hot!
That was a good Chi-Chi basher! I really hate chi-Chi!
U should write another!! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 03:53 CST
Comment/Review:
::twitches:: I'M the one who's about to break! WOW! Truly delicious... love the pseudo-tussle for dominance. |
