| "Forget Me Nots" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: ~Maggie~ On: July 12, 2005 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I think I started reading this awhile ago becasue the first chapter sounded familiar. Either way--What a read!! This story caught my interest right away becasue I was curious to see who was the unconcious person (I was pretty sure it was Inuyasha but I was still curious) and to see who the scent belonged to. It was also a twist when I found out that you were following with the original story becasue I've read memory problem stories where it's Alternate Universe. Having Inuyasha speak in third person also makes a bold statement and I love how we get to see what he's thinking since in the manga we barely get insight to all his thoughts. I want more please! That person that he was talking to in the last chapter, at first I thought it was Koga then he said he was a hanyou and I'm like wha...? Then I though Jeneji but then he said Kagura was a traitor and I'm like---Nooooo!!!! And my sister was like "WHat's wrong...?" Lol. Anyways, I must know if it's Naraku or not! Must-read-another-chapter! I've been reading things all week and marking things here and there on my favorites but yours is one that I'm REALLY excited about reading another chapter. You're a talented writer with an amazing noggin to think up such a story! Until the next chapter! *crosses fingers* Much love! ^^
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Reviewed By: RaptorChicky On: July 10, 2005 23:12 CDT
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Not bad, not bad at all. (tho the formating is screwy in places, but that's not ur fault) You haven't read any other "Inuyasha's brains get too rattled" fics? Well, here's 2 for you: my own, "Seeds of Doubt" over on ff.net and "A Clean Slate" by Author-chan, also on ff.net. The 2nd is quite good, but the other one...oh boy, i've been stuck for year! grrrrrr.... Nevermind. Good story, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Cielo On: August 06, 2004 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please, PLEASE continue! It's soooo much fun to read! If and when you update e-mail me at cieovanhelsing@yahoo.com. Ciao! Loves ya!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't make everyone wait a year for an update. I just read this fic for the first time today and I'm already dying to know what's going to happen! Please update! You have an amazing talent!
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Reviewed By: YoukoKurama201 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 16:19 CDT
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Okay, why do I have a very big feeling that those scars on Kagome came from Sesshou-sama, Inu-chan, or Naraku? Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Goddess of Anime On: April 07, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, did Sesshou-maru-sama put those scratches on Kagome, or was it Inu-Yasha himself? I bet I know! *whispers* Inu-Yasha. *looks pleased with self* Well, be sure to update or I'll have Kiri-hime go after you. -Goddess of Anime
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Reviewed By: Mareana On: March 27, 2004 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it alot it was really good can't wait till the next one!
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Reviewed By: Vivi (the origanal) On: February 27, 2004 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooo, the suspense is killing meeee! *fidgets* Please, please, PLEASE update. Like, right now! *twitches* Need more chapters. Must...read...more! *clears throat and calms self down* Anyhoo, I luv, luv, luved!!!! Please, CONTINUUUEEE!!!!!!! -Goddess of Anime
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Reviewed By: Bleryn On: July 15, 2003 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZZZZZZZZZZZ continue! I LOVE THIS FIC! |
Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 27, 2003 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please write more! This is a great story idea, I can't wait to see how things turn out. |
Reviewed By: Sorrow On: June 08, 2003 04:31 CDT
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I like your story alot come on write more please
when are they going to find out he doesnt
remember them |
Reviewed By: NightShadow On: March 23, 2003 03:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're story is VERY interesting!! I can't wait to find out what happened. Keep up the great work and UPDATE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: March 14, 2003 09:54 CST
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Thank you for the clarification on the whole sit thing. I didn't know that. Cool. You learn something new every day. I love your story. Please continue!! I can't wait for more!! |
