| "The Mirai Trunks Complex" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is Completed? Vegeta does not stop being such a jerk? Sigh. Good writing but it does not sound like the ending.
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Reviewed By: Nadiya 68 On: November 29, 2004 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Trunks, you're a badboy.... But I like you! Please update!!
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Reviewed By: Deva On: November 29, 2004 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good story! I like this!! Please... Continue!! This fanfiction is original!!
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Reviewed By: Princess Timbrel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wierd Trunks seems pretty messes up even his younger/past self can sense it. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: swissmiss On: July 12, 2004 02:10 CDT
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you HAVE to write more and you have to do it soon. it's not an option.
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Reviewed By: Ominous Prophecy On: June 17, 2004 07:54 CDT
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OK, so Sage told me to read this and I don't feel like stoning her for the recommendation, which is always a good thing ^_~ I do NOT like incest pairings at all so Bulma and Vegeta staying together was a really big incentive for me to read this. I like psycho characters as well and you do an awesome job of portraying Mirai as a wackjob! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what else you have stirring in his warped little mind…
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Reviewed By: Sageling On: June 17, 2004 07:45 CDT
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This story is pretty interesting. I don't know what that makes me @_@ but I like what you're doing. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TsumeIshida [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Meh heh heh heh... likey, I do indeed. Read your story, or the version of it, on ff.net... but that one had another chappie to it. More chappies? Please. Like I said before, or at least what I think I may remember having said, your story "rocks". Hmm, yes, "rocks" is a bit lame, but I am incompetent and can come up with nothing better... I do appreciate your disclosure of the reasons for your distraction... that would be *mildly* distracting in any case. ::chortle:: (don't get to do much chortling lately) I do find your (or your roomate's) redefinition of "making out" chortle-worthy. Luckily for me, I have not been subjected to such interferences, but unluckily for me you have not updated. That makes me sad. Sad indeed. No one updates anymore, and that makes for much sadness. Much sadness. Story good. No updates. Sadness abounds. Only you can end the sadness. Remember, walk in the shade and avoid falling coconuts.
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Reviewed By: Tenchi no Kori On: July 22, 2003 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job:) I've always wanted to see something like this:) But isn't trunks a bit obvious here? (meaning Mirai, of course). I don't know, but this is definitely a fic in a class of its own:) Good job, i look to seeing more in the future! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh - I usually avoid incest like the plague, but damn what a plot!! Plus *glomps A-chan* You kept darling Mirai Gohan alive!!! That was the main reason I read this - I LOVE Mirai Gohan... Anyway, VERY enjoyable so far, please hurry and continue, before I'm forced to spork you... : D |
Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 22:07 CDT
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Hey. :) So far, i'm liking this story! Damn that boy is warped! Even his little self can sense it!You mentioned that you might put bulma and vegeta together in the end. If that happens, have mairai trunks go back to his time and steal his 'real' mom back from the interloper! 0_o Talk about a plot twist. :) |
Reviewed By: master yoshi On: June 05, 2003 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gohan and bulma are a great couple!
trunks goes back in time to seduce his mom?
i wonder what vegeta would say?
vegeta: so, trunks is his own father! i can see the family resemblance!
bulma: what?!? that's impossible! there must be some mistake!
though that would explain why his dna is identical to mine... |
Reviewed By: Jackie On: March 15, 2003 07:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this.. please continue. This idea is one that other people (myself included) might have thought about, but were not brave enough to write it. I am looking forward to future trunks
meeting up with B & V. Keep writing and ignore any flames ! ^_^ |
