| "Dynasty" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Garen On: September 08, 2005 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn good lemon, damn good. Can I marry you? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Windy River On: September 04, 2004 02:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm liking it so far, please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Merit On: July 10, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great because it was different from most lemons and had a good plot.
Also I liked the bit about Heero's 'grandmother'. |
Reviewed By: Tavern Wench On: June 29, 2003 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay in this chapter you had the pharoh ask duo and heero to be "gentile" with each other did you mean gentle or did you mean not jewish? |
Reviewed By: Tavern Wench On: June 29, 2003 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i've just started reading this but....
it just seems odd that the king would actually say he was getting his son a catamite. that's more of an insult, something to call someone then um a job description. it also sounds kinda odd |
Reviewed By: cobaltprincess On: April 10, 2003 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hugs* thanks for sending me the link. i loved the lemon. it was cool. please try and update soon. i'll love you forever if you do ^.^ |
Reviewed By: IchigoPocky On: March 15, 2003 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, thanks for the email with the link! Awsome Fic, I must say I look forward to more chapters....there are more right!!!!! cuz the whole i love my slave thing can add for some nice lil big angsty in the end wut will heero do thing! ahhhhhhh |
Reviewed By: Naomi On: March 15, 2003 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FanTAStic. I can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good fic so far (needs more parts, hint). The intro was a little long-winded. Is Duo not human? Heero was a little OOC in Ch 1. |
Reviewed By: madame_knight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Doing well so far! I have to admit I am intrigued by some of your little hints in Chapter 3. And you seem to maybe be aluding to something in the future that is usually most unusual...but I won't give it away for other readers! :D But those are some of my most favorite kinds of fics! Hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 09:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The lemon was great. But who is Duo? At one point he thought something like: "the humans".... doesn't that imply that he isn't a human? And why did his father send him there (to earth, to the palace????) as a punishment?
I hope you are going to answer these questions soon.
And yes, I bet Cleopatra would have been a pretty cool Grandma. But as it is, she didn't live that long to see any of her grandchildren if she ever had one. But she had a son. That I'm pretty sure of. |
Reviewed By: Night On: March 16, 2003 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
On ething to say: LEMON.... luv lemon, adores lemon... Are we gonna learn more stuff about Duo's past, where he's from??? |
Reviewed By: Inferno On: April 06, 2003 05:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okays, i said i'd read it! And i did, and i liked it.
As you might know, this is not the best GW fic, or the best lemon i have ever read, but it is very decent. After all, we are all learning and evolving with our writing all the time, so more practice makes it all worthwhile.
I like the concept of master/slave. Ugh, i did not say this out loud. ^^
*coughcough*
Anyway. I did enjoy it considerably and will be glad to see it continued. Practice, work and all will be well. ^^
~ferni-chan |
Reviewed By: Sparda219 On: March 21, 2003 22:37 CST
Comment/Review:
YES!!!!! LEMONY FRESHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! 'Bout time. Excellent work. The demon is pleased. (FYI I've posted, like, eight lemons in my time. Not a single peep from the admins.) |
Reviewed By: Marie On: March 16, 2003 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you will continue with this fic. Itīs funny, the story is great, it has my favourite couple Herro And Duo in it and I canīt wait to the next chapter, so please, PLEASE continue!!!!!! |
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