| "Tease" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: angelic_yokai On: October 14, 2003 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
high rating for the steamy teasing...very good overall
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Reviewed By: Amy the Yu On: April 05, 2003 14:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoa...Hakkai...*slobber slobber drool drool* O.O Damn, I need to go get a mop and bucket and clean up after my overworked saliva glands
PEACE OUT =) |
