| "Bear thy Cross" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: EphemeralFantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one turned out great as well! I'd have one shred of advice though, don't always trust the auto-spell checker it can be very evil at times XDD
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Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy On: April 13, 2003 11:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wowies. THis was great. I absolutely loved it. Keep up hte good work and please continue to write fics. Fantastic. JA nA |
Reviewed By: Dalamar's Mercy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes, that's why that's quite low. I love your style of writing, especially in the first couple of chapters. I felt you moved the ending along too quickly though, but I am glad you didn't make endless amounts of chapters like some people, where it seems to be the same bloody thing each time.
Now I'll have to read the first part, it wasn't until I was in about the 7th chapter that I realized that I was reading the wrong part.
Looking forward to the sequel!
Perhaps I may try drawing that picture for you...I'll have a go at it anyways. That could be fun. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Aria On: March 22, 2003 09:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so cute!!! I hope you add a lot more to it soon cause I can't wait for you to do that! I hope you add more to this really soon cause I want to see Heero's icy shell broken! Especially by Duo! I am waiting until you update!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Brat On: March 22, 2003 05:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really like your style of writing. This is a good story. Hope others review so I can read what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: March 15, 2003 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWaaaaiiiii,...a SSeeqqquueellllll to SShhhaaaterrrrrrrggllaaassss,....LLooooovveeeeee it,...continue soon please,...and please tone-down on the angsts kay,...poor duo-kun,...*ssssiiggghhhhh*....keep-up the good work,...till next chapter,...[if ya continue]...Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGaaanbbaaateeeeeeee-Neeeeeee!!^.~!! |
