| "The blur Image" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 16:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
BASTARDS!!!! jk just continued please
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Reviewed By: always On: May 22, 2005 11:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
OI!! what was that? you know cliffhangers are not the best things in the world? Other than that everything was really good. except the spelling. But that is beside the point. It was really, really good and I think that you need to continue the story and ummm... make it longer. So please continue the story. Greatly appreciated!!
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Title: The Blur Image
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Rocky On: June 19, 2003 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I loved it!!!!!!!! Please write MORE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sako On: May 21, 2003 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oi.......tats so cute |
Reviewed By: aurora_skys On: April 05, 2003 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
its...short. very short. please update, and with longer, more in-depth chapters. |
Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 04:59 CST
Comment/Review:
seems good.... update soon please |
Reviewed By: Saro On: March 15, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I couldn't give you a better rating. Really, the only thing that brought this down was bad grammar and some spelling/word usage errors. The story itself really has a lot of potential, and while your premise isn't entirely original, there is still plenty of room for you to be creative with it.
I want to see this story update. I'm curious what will happen next. I doubt it could be anything too, shall we say, 'energetic' since Inu's lost a lot of blood... but then, hey, he's a demon so whatever.
I suggest editing and reposting your first chapter. Don't take offense, but some people will have trouble with the conventions. |
Reviewed By: Catchfire On: March 20, 2003 02:05 CST
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Very good storyline and idea. But you are in serious need of a good beta. Your writing is choppy and hard to read. The descriptions are good though. It's like you wrote as fast as you could to get everything in your head down. Then didn't go back and clean it up. I'd like to see that done. So please find a beta and finish this story. I want to see what happens next. Good Luck. |
