| "Aftermath Romances" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chargos24 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics I've read in a while and cannot wait till you continue it. I am anxious to find out who Fiona's mother actually is and also to see Van's and Fiona's wedding.
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Reviewed By: LEO7KAT On: April 30, 2004 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fanfic THe public would enjoy it if you wrote more like this. Please focus on Van and Fiona in the future!!
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Reviewed By: Irvine On: August 24, 2003 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Irvine, he's my man! I love the IrvinexMoonbay one! Write more! XD
Irvine
P.S. I'm a girl! XP |
Reviewed By: Fenfoxx On: June 12, 2003 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
can you say shagadellic? this was the best. I Rarely ever see Van/Fiona so this has really brought me around. that chapter was so awsome. i loved it in general. hey, but seriously, make a
Van/Fiona fic where they go like all out,, you know,, everything. and i mean everything. that would kick sooo much ;) --go ahead--Fen. |
Reviewed By: Tramp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2003 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got one word for you. NIIIIIIIICE.
Very well done and quite naughty. I wish there were more fics like this. I'd love to see more Van/Fiona fics from you, or, possibly some Bit/Leena fics if you like that chapter of the Zoids saga. Both seem to be in short supply here. |
Reviewed By: zero On: May 10, 2003 05:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter keep writing them. |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
*jawdrop* Amazing job! I love the RavenxReese and IrvinexMoonbay pairings, and those had to be the best jobs of them ever! YAAAY!!! |
Reviewed By: Zero On: April 13, 2003 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story only wishing more types of these stories could come up. Keep it up |
Reviewed By: thalian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 11:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
recently read the newest chapter well done. hope you do continue with this fic. i have really enjoyed reading it. |
Reviewed By: the ravenous liger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not Chinese, I am learning it.
Anyway I love ur fic but pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez expand ur sex scenes, u've started eith the breasts 4 all of them n its getting tired!!!!! |
Reviewed By: thalian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 23:17 CST
Comment/Review:
dont listen to any criticism you have done a great job. |
Reviewed By: Tramp [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Over all, pretty good. You need to seriously work on your grammar and spelling though. There are a ton of grammatic and spelling errors in all three chapters. Also, you might want to expand on the sex scenes a little more. |
Reviewed By: Dragon_of_Ecstacy On: March 21, 2003 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sweet, but me want more descriptive sex.
Also, pleeez do Moonbay/Irvine, they're my fave |
Reviewed By: DreamStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love them both. Please do and Irvine/Moonbay Lemon |
Reviewed By: Lady Jayde Une [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Do an IRVINE MOONBAY CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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