| "The Foreshadowing" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 12:22 CDT
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OMG! comeoncomeoncomeon!! Where's the next chapter! *yanks out Yugi to give the author the puppy eyes* MWAHAHA! You're powerless against my QDY (Quick Draw Yugi, patent pending)! Now get writing! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 14:00 CDT
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That was a good rape scene. It was well written and this entire story wis really good. Keep it up |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 17:11 CDT
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EEEPPP!!! Poor Ryou! Poor Seto!! POOR MOKUBA!!! More, please?! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: April 08, 2003 22:02 CDT
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Out of all the people in this series and you pick Seto Kaiba for her to impersonate? Uh huh... well I don't even get that one... but I like this fic and I hope you update with new stuff real soon! Arigato! ^^ Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 19:03 CDT
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Don't leave it there!! Gods!! Please update again soon!!! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooo very good. can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 07:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool! ^_^ please update soon! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 22:13 CST
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Yay! I just love great ficies like this one
Karen: oh, for the love of Ra, would you grow up!
Lupusdragon: I can't help it that good ficies make me hyper ^-^
Karen: Well, it was really good. I personally love anything that involves Malik and Marik. They are insane, kind of like you.
LD: Yeah, well I like Ryou and Bakura 'cause, I just do!
Karen: Oh, great come-back
LD: :-P |
Reviewed By: NaomiChang [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE! I demand a update! ^_^ Hehehe ncice ficcy so far! Update soon~! |
Reviewed By: ania On: March 22, 2003 10:49 CST
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hey she wote my name in darr !! hey kendra sup girl? i read the other chp ok well the parts u told me to read ne way! lol !! umm can sumone say ur a lil horny? lmao !! BUUUUDDDDDDDYYYYY!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 18:06 CST
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*glares* I want a lemon! Lemon! *glareglare*
Kekaku:*hits Mary-ohki*
Mary-ohki: Kekaku! What the heck was that for?!
Kekaku:You were on another lemon rant.
Mary-ohki:oh...
Kekaku: Continue the fic! It's fun! Was Kaiba wearing heart boxers?*snicker* |
Reviewed By: Mercury Elf On: March 20, 2003 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY HAVEN"T YOU UPDATED YET??? I'M GOING CRAZY HERE!!! DON'T STOP!!! =D |
Reviewed By: ania On: March 19, 2003 20:09 CST
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dats my babie girl kennny wOooHoooOoO !!! read only half, but still luv ya =) |
Reviewed By: Bishojo_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so very intrested now! You must update soon its really good so far! And Bakura's nice! |
Reviewed By: Mercury Elf On: March 24, 2003 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is great so far! Please continue! ^_^ |
