| "Love thy Enemy" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: yami hikari On: April 04, 2003 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome fic! *claps* I really hope that the next chapter comes out soon!!!!!(tell you how sad i am)It took forever to find this story but it was worth it (from FFN). Anyways that was a great GREAT chapter. |
Reviewed By: Lynn-chan On: April 01, 2003 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story so far, and I can't wait to read the rest! |
Reviewed By: Victoria On: March 31, 2003 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I came here from ff.net, stupid policy, I disagree with Moeko. Well on most parts. Kyo lets his emotions overcome him way more than Yuki does, so I think he would be the lead in their first time, then as Yuki got more comfortable with everything he would try the top. I don't think that Kyo would give a BJ like that though, and I'm certain that Yuki would not turn it down. But that's just my views, so good job, I wanna see their reactions and if they go public.
(Oh I gave the Originality a 9 'cause the hate turned love is done a lot, though not nessisarily in the Fruits Basket world.) |
Reviewed By: Victoria On: March 31, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I came here from ff.net, stupid policy, I disagree with Moeko. Well on most parts. Kyo lets his emotions overcome him way more than Yuki does, so I think he would be the lead in their first time, then as Yuki got more comfortable with everything he would try the top. I don't think that Kyo would give a BJ like that though, and I'm certain that Yuki would not turn it down. But that's just my views, so good job, I wanna see their reactions and if they go public. |
Reviewed By: Moeko On: March 22, 2003 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a few things to say. You previously said that you would ease them into the steamy sex scenes but I don't see that. I think the kiss would have been enough for now. I would have liked to see how they acted when they faced eachother.
Now about that 'steamy sex scene.' I don't really see Kyou as the one giving the blow; I think Yuki would be the one. (*ha~* Yes right to the point. -_-;) I believe Yuki would be the one who would lead the first time they made love. My reasoning here: He was the first to accept his feelings for Kyou. Kyou was still reluctant to. Kyou did step forward but I would think it was just the heat of the moment. When the initial heat died down he would realize what he was doing then I believe would be the best moment for Yuki to take the lead.
But I enjoyed it nonetheless. I like your idea. Keep up the good work. You'd better finish it...(^_~) |
Reviewed By: chibiookamigirl On: March 19, 2003 08:02 CST
Comment/Review:
ooohhhh....very nice... |
Reviewed By: Megumi-chan On: March 19, 2003 00:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Ummm... Errrrr... Hi? ^^;;;
Sorry if I'm a bit... speechless? rude? @_@ I don't review... stories... that... much...
ANYWAYS, Please continue. I like the fic! Keep up the good work!
Ja, Mata!!!!! (See you again!!!!)
Megumi-chan |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: March 15, 2003 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! ^_^ Keep up the great work.
Love & Peace |
Reviewed By: Himiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the fic :) your a very good writer, and the little comments at the top and bottom of the page are purely funny =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Akira_Khushrenada_Merquise On: June 06, 2003 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey........ I'm loving the fic so far!!!
Sooooo..... yes I want you to finish it....
*grins* I soooooo want to see Yuki on top!!!! ^-^
*gets some nice Y/K images in her head* uhhhh....*grins* he he I'm suuuuuuuuuuch a Hentai!! |
Reviewed By: Cayenne On: March 16, 2003 16:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Stupid ff.net. Anyway, great fic and can;t wait for the next chapter. I saw this over on ff.net and decided to come over here to check out the rest of it and it was well worth it. Keep up the good work! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Sie On: July 15, 2003 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story and am hopping to see chapter seven soon. |
Reviewed By: ParaNormal On: March 18, 2003 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAIIII! ! ! i loooooved the fic! i wanna read more...what happens what happens? please keep writing! i loooove the yuki-kyou pairing. ^.~ but i have to say a haru-kyou would be good too...*evil grins* keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Silvercrystal9 On: March 27, 2003 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tracked this fic down and it took forever for this site to come up at my schools lab but I thank the Gods because Damn I mean Damn, nosebleed , good sex scene goood gooood gooooooooooooooooood sex scene and as always the story is great, but i did track you down to see this chapter since i agree FFN has been jerks about the NC17 stuff, *sniffles** they took that away. |
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