| "Love thy Enemy" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: HENTAI LOVER On: May 03, 2005 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fanfic's great!!! i love it!!! write more......with more pairings!!!
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Title: needs a lil work
Reviewed By: Sakume Yatana On: April 30, 2005 21:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just read chap 1, pretty good, but too much character/author interactive Authors Notes. A little less of those to crawl thru looking for story would be nice.
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Reviewed By: AyameLover#? On: November 10, 2004 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're never going to finish this, are you? *shrugs* Ah, well, just thought I'd let you know that I liked it..........
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Reviewed By: kaziekaze8259 On: October 10, 2004 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved you fic!! you should write one of how Ayame and shigure got together!!!! so pretty!!!!! But part of the time i was hoping that yuki would get raped by kyo!
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Title: *Couphcouph*
Reviewed By: Katalina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 20:18 CDT
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That was hilarious ^O^
I couldn't stop laughing....k'so nezumi and baka neko are sooooo cuuute! |
Reviewed By: baka-neko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 06:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fanfic! its my first review ever, i really felt like i had to review this one ^^, please keep writing both of you! |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 06:07 CDT
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OMG that chapter was fantastic.....I thoroughly enjoyed it and can't wait for you tooo post more.....I love Kyou/Yuki ficcies soo much....-giggles-.....please hurry and update soon.....I really wanna read more....JA~ |
Reviewed By: Lily (Lily no Anrui on ff.net) On: July 15, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As the title says, I still like the fic! I'm just going to review here, but I did the next two chapters on ff.net. I'd say, overall, this is a really good fic. I thought it could use a little more detail though, in the body paragraphs, and perhaps the lemon was a little odd. I would think that since Kyou was the one to deny his feelings he would be reluctant to consummate anything, and that Yuki would be the one to take charge. Oh well...It was still good! Is there a sequel for this? I saw mentionings of it on ff.net... |
Reviewed By: Gia On: July 06, 2003 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just absolutely love this! ^_^ But I have one question.. is this different from the one on FFNET?? Or is this just a differnt version? I just need that cleared up! Could you email me your answer at: divinechild18@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: July 06, 2003 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my they went from start to finish in record time. |
Reviewed By: Tayles [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgive the low originality mark but *shrug* it IS a Kyou/Yuki get-together *grin*
Me lika this a lot. And yeah, blush, you naughty writer! *snickers* Do we get to see Yuki on top? *gets on her knees and begs* Pretty please?
Interesting, I think they need to have a Discussion (ooh, capital letter) about their Feelings (uh oh, and again). The smut was nice (very, very nice) but I'd like to see them explain their actions a bit.
And more smut, I'm always up for more smut. Heh. I now have some delish mental images of Yuki sprawled on a futon with his kimono open and splayed beneath him, and his hair falling in feathery strands to the pillow, eyes shining as he looks up... Damn. I need to write me a Fruits Basket fic.
Write more! Please?! *looks desperate*
~Tayles.x |
Reviewed By: zade On: April 16, 2003 13:05 CDT
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A very readable fic - there's not enough furuba yaoi-ness out there! To make an ecchi comment though - I don't know why so many fanfic writers assume sex in "that" way is painful. It's NOT!!! - not whatsoever! If it's painful, they must be doing it *very* wrong!^^;;; Sorry bout that, just read one too many fic with such a weird presumption in it. Otherwise, all a-okay - thanks for writing and keep up the good work!:) |
Reviewed By: Yaoi fan On: April 14, 2003 19:19 CDT
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oh my...this was....! great!!! i want more....pleeeeeeeeeeeeease?! |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 13:49 CDT
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Good JOb....Keep up the good work and please write some more. Kyou/Yuki rocks. JA nA |
Reviewed By: Tsuzuku On: April 06, 2003 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHHH~!!!!!!! I want to see Yuki's Dominance n Kyo's pain n pleasure!! Pls continue! Onegai!! U r a very gd writer not rushing into the "FUN" parts but took time to explain it all hahah I thoroughly enjoyed ur fic! pls pls continue! N the comedy part hahah it seems Kyo is only interested in beating Yuki!*puts face onto Kyo's back...one handhugging him n the other reaching down~ stroking* "there there Kyo-sama i'm always here if u r nit satisfied with Yuki~.." Tsuzuku said in a passionate voice...LoL seeee u r not the nly psycho here! High FIVE~! Anywayz GAMBATTE~! |
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