| "Jisatsu" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kage Ohkami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 11:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
AW! that was so sweet! i like the ending of it. ~LaTeR ^__^ Kage Ohkami
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Reviewed By: Wind Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 07:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Dude that was cool. you did a good job on it.
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Reviewed By: Offhand On: September 22, 2003 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really nice--about the first fanfic I've ever found that wasn't pointless! Please write more;)
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Reviewed By: Xejo On: April 13, 2003 19:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, good job. I liked it a lot. My only complaint is that it was a little on the short side, but you got the point across beautifully so it worked out. I didn't notice any distracting problems with spelling or grammar either. Anyway, nice fic. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: NightShadow On: April 09, 2003 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT job!! You should continue it, it sounds like it would be VERY interesting. Keep up the GREAT work and UPDATE SOON!!!! |
