| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Continue!
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really getting interesting! Please continue A.S.A.P!
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Reviewed By: Diamond On: March 20, 2003 15:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter, keep going |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 23:07 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a good introduction. Please post another chapter soon!! |
Reviewed By: Dwarf On: March 15, 2003 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U ended it there???.............NO..................u must have more soon........Very good....Love the Sarah character! |
Reviewed By: devilzlilgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really good....UPDATE SOON...
its kinda confusing with all the characters speaking at once...could u separate each character's speech in a different line.
EXAMPLE:
"Yami, I have to say something," said Seto.
"What is it?" Yami said.
*not all bunched up in a paragraph* |
