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Reviewed By: bandit-gurl42 On: March 20, 2003 05:59 CST
Comment/Review:
i bet its another pilot thats the fater 0_o. will we ever find out from you??? this is pretty good. |
Reviewed By: Will On: March 18, 2003 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more fast I am in need of something to piss my friends off with and the rest will really do the trick you write some of my fav. fics thanx bye! |
Reviewed By: Seth On: March 18, 2003 08:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool. Now who knocked up Relena? And why wasn't it HEERO?!!!Something tells me Heero's gonna blow a gasket. Miliardo already has. Very nice writing and the 1st person POV is a nice touch. You can really feel the angst from Relena. |
Reviewed By: Lina Gabriev On: March 17, 2003 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Relena, you bad girl you! And Heer's going to be pissed! Good, maybe this will actually get them together. |
Reviewed By: Tonya Harding On: March 17, 2003 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'll bite? Who got her pregnant? And why didn't you have ir be Heero, you mean author!!! =P |
Reviewed By: Kellis On: March 17, 2003 11:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who's the daddy?! I've always wanted to say that. Seriously, who could it be? Now I'm all for H/R pairings, but can you make the daay Trowa? Really like him paired up with Relena. ^^ |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: March 17, 2003 11:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Except for a minor spelling error, here and tere, I liked this a lot. As crazy in love with Heero Relena is, how can she be pregnant with another man's child? And what is Milliardo planning? |
Reviewed By: Xellos-sama On: March 17, 2003 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intruiging story. I'm curious as to who the daddy is? If not Heero than who is it? One of the other guys? Keep the chapters coming. |
Reviewed By: Xellos-sama On: April 01, 2003 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez, that stinks for Relena. At least Heero's man enough to stick by her. I love him!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Abby On: April 01, 2003 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for writing such a story! Sometimes the GW world needs a little reality. I truly love your writing! |
Reviewed By: Seth On: March 29, 2003 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't get over who's the daddy! Heero's not going to let Trowa take advantage and steal his girl is he? Better not. |
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