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Reviewed By: Kina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. And i totally agree with your reasoning. The abortion was a good thing in my book. Relena's and Heero's relationship would have been ruined with the presence of the baby no matter how much they loved each other or what Heero said about loving it because it was hers. The only thing i didn't agree with(although it sounded better without it) was the no descripted love scene. I get what your saying but it wouldn't have been "romping", I would have been "making love". Some severely needed Love making if you ask me!(Hehe!) |
Reviewed By: A person not done reading ya fic, yet On: June 14, 2003 18:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I HOPE HEERO'S DA DAD!!!! |
Reviewed By: Mimi H. On: April 10, 2003 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii!!! Especially the ending with wedding scene. Perfect. |
Reviewed By: *Dimples On: April 06, 2003 22:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, my kind of ending, though I'm still sad about the baby. Still great job. |
Reviewed By: n/a On: April 05, 2003 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finish already!!! |
Reviewed By: Macy Gray On: April 05, 2003 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want my mommy! This was sad!!! And I need that last chapter soon. Don't leave me hanging, Kuno-baby! |
Reviewed By: Lina Gabriev On: April 01, 2003 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this whole chapter was so sad! felt bad for relena. but i'm more in love with heero than ever. he's the best! i can't wait for more. do a sequel! |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: April 01, 2003 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! Poor Relena and Heero, especially poor her! Heero's my hero for staying with her through it! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: *Dimples On: March 24, 2003 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Cow! I'm totally shocked, I could have sworn it was Duo! But glad it's not. Trowa got what he deserved! |
Reviewed By: Airen On: March 22, 2003 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that...um, well, a certain someone is the father. I was totally expecting it to be Duo, for some reason. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this fic. Hope to see the next chapter up soon. :D |
Reviewed By: Mimi H. On: March 22, 2003 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some friend! I can't believe took advantage like that, the rat! He deserved the beat down he got! |
Reviewed By: Jennifer 8 On: March 22, 2003 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my God! I can't believe he's the father! Heero was majorly pissed. I know won't abandon Relena. He better not! |
Reviewed By: Jennifer 8 On: March 22, 2003 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my God! I can't believe he's the father! Heero was majorly pissed. I know won't abandon Relena. He better not! |
Reviewed By: Abby On: March 21, 2003 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy stories like this! Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Will On: March 20, 2003 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who is the dad I have to know come on who is it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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