| "Unforgiven" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Nate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time I've ever seen Chaos Dukemon in a story, and the way you explained his origin was gripping. Great story all around. Nice joke about Alice's dog fetish. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sasumi On: May 03, 2003 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm... I have to say I'm disapointed this wasn't an overall Juri fanfic as it looked to be. And I'm not a Rukato fan, so I'll just give you a 5. It's so so. |
Reviewed By: Ryu Izumi On: March 26, 2003 07:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry, for the double review, but I'm just curious. I noticed something resembling the anime series Betterman from the baby being the D-Reaper. Late in the series, a baby one of the women was carrying started causing some problems. |
Reviewed By: Izumi Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 11:29 CST
Comment/Review:
That's a new one on me. Very interesting, Archive. |
Reviewed By: Final_Xero [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
0.0 ......Um, whoa?
Man, that was unbeliveable! And the wierdest thing is, since I started typing this, I think I've figured out where you got the idea that started it all. And it's so simple! I'll bet you started with the 'sleeper program', and things went from there... Just a guess.
Anyway, it was great, even though I'm not used to that level of intensity in stories. |
Reviewed By: Anna Yolei On: March 18, 2003 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your best story yet-not too much sex and graphic stuff in it. Very creative. |
Reviewed By: Gray On: March 18, 2003 13:24 CST
Comment/Review:
A rather bleak look on the possible future, but it's well written. |
Reviewed By: Canis Black On: March 16, 2003 13:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I noticed a few changes from your original draft, and while the changes do make the story slightly less...disturbing, I think they added a fairly decent bit to the effect. It's still very good though. Can't wait to see your next offering. |
Reviewed By: Jay Man On: March 16, 2003 10:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Well I'm glad you warned me about the off character stuff or I might have stopped reading. This fic has incredible potential but could stand as a one shot if that's what you wanted. Great fic and I'm glad to hear from you. |
Reviewed By: Ryan Griffin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 13:06 CST
Comment/Review:
To quote Stan from South Park: Dude, this is pretty fucked up right here.
Of course, it's a good fucked up, the kind of fucked up you can be proud of, because it takes a lot of skill to fuck something up in the way you have fucked Tamers up with this pinnacle of fucked-up-ness. I salute this fic in all its fucked up glory.
May you continue your great tradition of fucking things up,
Ryan Griffin |
