| "The Wild Tamer" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: ladyserenity On: January 06, 2004 18:50 CST
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cool story more chapters
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Reviewed By: WyldeHorse On: April 21, 2003 11:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really awesome. I can't wait to see more of this!
Just one suggestion: You keep writing 'you' when it should be 'you're'. You might want to try to pay some more attention to that. All in all, though, it's very well done! |
Reviewed By: DokuRyu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a very weird writer...You write just like Micheal Moore, well maybe not quite, but you really remind me of him. You're style is very sarcastic, outspoken, relaxed, and yet serious. You had a few too many errors over the chapters but that's forgivable, we all make mistakes, especially me. Your story was really fun to read. The only reason you didn't get a ten is because Renamon is a F*****G digimon!!!!! Really, how are you going to develop her liking him???? Takato is pretty sweet but I don't know this Mie character, she had better not be the blonde from Yugioh! And really good choice on Ranma 1/2, you said in an earlier chapter that we shouldn't flame you for making Takato "thick", all I have to say is if he wasn't he wouldn't be a Soatome.
~peace~
Ryu(as in DokuRyu, not whatever name appears above)* |
Reviewed By: HimitsuTheHunter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
May this unholy alliance forever carry on... (or at least until it ends)^_^ |
Reviewed By: Canis Black On: April 02, 2003 18:30 CST
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Another awesomely funny chapter. I love how Yamaki's suggestion wasn't toooooo far off the actual mark. There were some superpowered martial artist's with very little brains involved... :) |
Reviewed By: power of renamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 06:58 CST
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This fanfic is cool, I like it write more |
Reviewed By: Wyld Stallyns [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 19:34 CST
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HAHAHA! Good to see that you posted your fic here. Oh, by the way, this is SerpentTreize. |
