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| "Brief Encounter" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] | Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: July 06, 2003 19:02 CDT
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Waaaahhhh an epilogue...IF WE WANT ONE O__O...are you crazy *is screaming*...SURE SURE SURE...GIMME THE EPILOGUE!!!!! Ooohh *clears her throat*...I didn't meant to get that loud^^, gomen^.^!
BUT PLEASE...give us an epilogue...it really is an open ending, I don't want it to end just like this...please!!!!!
*sigh*...I never thought to "see" Yohji again...this was a great scene at the end...between Yohji and Aya at the cemetery! So sweet and sad of course-_-...I nearly cried again! And the lemon...WOW...is going out of words^^!
Do you know what...I now have the X-Japan Ballad Collection CD. And what can I say...THE SONGS ARE INCREDIBLE..."Crucify My Love" oohhh my god...sooo sad and "The Last Song"...who is it they are mourning about, because it's also called "Memorial Track"??? Can anybody help me with that...I mean, I have a supposition, but I won't say it^.^...in case it's not right ^_^. Ahem and who is the person with the speaking passages...Yoshiki, am I right *hopefully hopefully hopefully* >_ | Reviewed By: Verdorbene Unschuld On: July 06, 2003 16:42 CDT
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No, have the epilogue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am very much enjoying this story and don't want it to end. please???? | Reviewed By: enervate On: July 06, 2003 08:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there's an Epilogue, this isn't the end, right?
[hopeful eyes]
Marvelous ending! Very in balance as a perfect and beautiful ending for such a angsty/dramatic piece of fiction. And the ending is very touching too... I love the part when Yohji 'comes to life' [or resurrected from the grave, I reckon?] and sort-of 'lectured' Aya. That part was beautiful! [takes a tissue and wipes eyes]
Aya sounded very Aya when he just snapped at Yoshi and left... his emotional roller-coaster portrayed then was really angsty! [thumbs up] And of how you put the ending together was nice... I was wondering if the 'Yohji' was just an apparition or some ghost or some impersonation or whatever... turns out he's REALLY a spirit... [am I right?]
Omi is such an angel,... [grins]
Well, overall? 11 out of a scale of ten. Now, now,... are you continuing Coincidences? :P
Happy Graduation and will be waiting if you return to M'sia. :) As for the moment,...
GANBATTE! Congrats! Brief is one of the best things I've ever read... [and that's a compliment]
P/S : Send my regards to Yo-bun! Give him a hug from me. :) | Reviewed By: enervate On: June 05, 2003 01:18 CDT
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**whacks Mediaminer**
After several times trying, FINALLY. Ne, sempai Nadia, just get wherever to host your fics but mediaminer. My patience is worn... LOL!
Well, this chap is superb! The drum scene is damn of a nice! Somewhat seductive too... Hahahaha! Yoshi drumming with eyes closed.. Aya playing drum [gosh! That one made me grin... hehehe!] ... then,... **giggles**
As usual, you deserve all thumbs [and fingers] up! Ganbatte!
**waves pom pom** | Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: May 25, 2003 15:30 CDT
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*Phew* Incredible...this lemon. Yep, we had to wait long-_-, but now we have the new part^^ and still one more to go...GREAT!!! This sweetness still is unbelievable, I could squeeze and hug Aya all the time ^.^...soooo cute!!!!
Hey, I have exams too (in June-_-)...EXAMS SUCKS =_=!!! But...THAT'S LIFE, ne^^. *ouuuuuuhhh YEAH* -_-
Ja *GOOOOOOOO GO GO*
Koji-chan | Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well.. I didn't comment after the last chapter. *kicks herself* Both were very beautiful. Your story is a true romance, tugging at my heart strings. I feel so sad for Aya. It just..wonderful.. beautiful. Yoshi is a great choice.. the songs.. everything! *quits blubbering and hurries off* | Reviewed By: Thorne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2003 00:20 CDT
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Another beautiful chapter, and once again you had me crying at the end. Poor Yohji.
I love this fic! | Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: April 24, 2003 03:58 CDT
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Oooohhhh sorry sorry sooooooorrryyyy that I did post my comment sooooooo much O_____O!!!!
It was a FAULT...I had problems with the connection to MM and didn't thought, that I had post it !
G O M E N !!!! -____-'' | Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: April 23, 2003 19:41 CDT
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Oh shit it was really soooo sad! I can't express my feelings I had while reading this fic like I want to *sigh* because my first language isn't English (it's German)-_-.
But this lemon scene (dream scene from Aya) between Yo x Aya was incredible good and SAD *sob* at the same time! I really cried again *oh oh today I had to cry a lot-_-...it's not good for me*-_-''. I not only loved the lemon scene...I loved the way Yohji and Aya treated each other (specific Aya treated Yo) too ...so sweet caring and lovely! When Yohji said: `Don't be sad when I'm gone Aya,'....`I hope you find someone who'll make you as happy as you have made me.'...my tears fell-_-!
You know, I lost my beloved grandma ten years ago (through cancer)...I (we...my family) wasn't there when she died-_-...but I think it must be terrible to see a beloved person die in front of your eyes, it is hard anyway!!! But at the end...I wish I would have been there -_- *sob*!!!
*siiiggghhh* but enough of me^^...I don't wish any other person such a terrible fate like Yohji and Aya had...it really must be terrible!!!
Saaa, I hope you post the next chap soon^^...can't wait to read it!!!
Ja
Koji-chan | Reviewed By: Lady Gackt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 03:27 CDT
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Migod, I keep crying. What're you doing to me?! That dream was *so* sad. I think this is the second fic to make me cry like that on two different occasions. And it feels like there'll likely be more.
The lemon was really good though... :)
And I can't wait for the next chapter (as masochistic as that must be, considering -_-). But really, I love this story so far!
Even if it's got me in this total X Japan mood, and feeling all down and wistful, hide and all that...
Aiy, wonderful fic =) | Reviewed By: enervate On: April 18, 2003 22:01 CDT
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Finally,... Mediaminer loaded this page....
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As usual, so happy to see this new chapter uploaded! Ecstatic, I am..... [well, since this chap was like.... exam-stress-buster? LOL!]
On with the reviews, ne?
From the start to the end, it was touching. Firstly, there's the beautiful [and lemony fresh **winks**] scene between Yohji and Aya in the hospital. The part that almost got me crying was the part that Yohji don't want Aya to feel sad over his... urm,... soon-to-be death. Of how you portrayed that part is touching. Sad,... **bleary eyes**
And the party part was nice.... I like the way you make Yoshi keep his calm... I mean, he doesn't rush off smooching Aya immediately but instead took it step by step.... slowly.... it was nice. I like to see such things going slowly, not in a hurry of some kind. **grins**
And when Forever Love was suggested by Yoshi, I was like... "OMG! Yay!"... hehehehe!
So many nice XJapan songs suggested in this chapter..... **grins widely** .... I think due to your influence, I'm getting a little too hooked on any Jrock songs that featured piano in it.... **giggles**
Well, overall? Beautiful.
Okay,... now now.... don't tell me that you are gonna take years to write the next chapter. Hayaku, onegai? I can't wait! But no matter what, all I know I can do now is to sit patiently and .... **groans** .... wait. | Reviewed By: Persephone On: April 07, 2003 19:10 CDT
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A 10 all the way. You definately flow..story is very interesting. I love when a story is written so good you forget your even reading. I hate to have a chara go but its very beautiful the way Ran remembers him. I got all teary eyed. I havent been moved by a fic since the GW fic "paper cranes" *boy did I cry on that one*. Please dont keep up waiting. I will be waiting with baited breath for you to update. GO GO GO! | Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 14:51 CST
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I was crying after the flashback... Your story is getting better with each part. I can't wait to read the next section! | Reviewed By: enervate / serena On: March 23, 2003 03:32 CST
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YEAH!!!! Sorry,.... over-excited coz it is finally updated.... LOL! Okay, before I read, I prepared my hanky as you've advised... and thankfully I did.... [grins] .... well, as usual, you've done a good.... wait... a terrific job! More things up soon, kay? When is the Red Nose Day thing, anyway? Is it some sort of a month-long fest or what? Well, miss ya lots and jyaa ne! Ganbatte kudasai! | Reviewed By: AppleNose On: March 21, 2003 05:24 CST
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As usual, Lituska_Silvermoon just blew me away :)i love the way u describe things...sad but nice..
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