| "Sore wa Himitsu..." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: CrimsonBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you finally posted this Neechan, but when are you gonna post the second chapter? Hurry up and post, or I'm gonna come over there *pulls out mallet*. |
Reviewed By: Yxonomei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 19:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Good ficcie. Just curious...Is Carrot gonna get glomped/assualted/molested/seduced by any of the guys? I just love Carrot slash!
I may be weird...but...I have...a...a...a PENCIL! Yes! Fear!
Heh, anyway, great story and I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Dj_Studios [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's a good story, but it was confusing towards the end, but anyway I like the feel of Carrot when it was revealed that she was really a he. Nice One. And congrats you've passed the 1st round of the Review segments called Jacked by Dj_Studios |
