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| "It's Only Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2003 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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HEYA! I've promised to read your fics and so on. So here's the review. ::looks embarrassed:: I think I've been away too long, because I've not seen the other chapters ::hides her head in shame:: But anyways, I was kinda busy with a lot of things. ^_^
Your style wasn't that bad. Easy discription and not really difficult to understand sentences.
It's really a little confusing when you jump around the scenes, but... that's not the real bad point.
I think this is quite original. I can imagine how Oz had worked themselves over just to capture both Heero and Duo. I can't believe it anyways, but yeah... I think it's original. Never read one like this. And they needed help? For some reason I could imagine Heero being a little soft.
I think it's quite an interesting start ::hides head in shame:: ;_; Sorry for not checking it out earlier so that I can read all of the chapters.
Anyways, Treize is playing with Wufei's mind or something? It must be a maze there. I hope Wufei can find his way out... I think I should check out the other chapters.
Interesting idea though and do keep up if you're not at the end of the story ^_^. | Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 15:18 CST
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You can't leave it there! *cries* Heero just kissed Duo!! *Does a happy dance* and Wufei...that boy is too adorable. lol. MORE MORE MORE>...and it is Labyrith inspired after all, awesome! | Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 04:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor Wufei, he always getds the hard missions! ANd what is actually wrong with Duo? Heero needs a good slap in the face; Emotions are GOOD silly boy. This fic is interesting, and ORIGINAL! I fell like Wufei is in the Labyrinth! lol. I keep expecting muppets to pop out at every turn. Instead there's robot guns and imaginary Quatres...all very strange! lol. More soon, yes? Please SOON! |
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