| "Model Behavior" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* Wee! That was awesome! I adored the remotely bittersweet ending because it kind of gives you the feeling that it's not an ending to them but simply an ending to what you get to see. If that makes any sense at all ^_^;;;. Excellent job well done! (as a personal plee, you should consider writing another chapter to follow this ^-^)
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Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: March 19, 2003 03:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MMMMaaaannnn,...*pout*..that was SSoooooo short,....is this just a one-shot????...or is there more chapters after this????...hope ya can continue,...this fic got potential to be much longger and with a more intresting plot,...and the lemon too can be much more detail and HHHooooottttttt,...not that this isn't,...but it still leaves me abit hanging,...*pout*.....well,...at least it's still good,..and i enjoyed reading it,...keep-up the good work kay,...till next time,..JJJaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaaaanbbbaaatttteeeeeeee-Neeeeeee!!^O^!! |
Reviewed By: la blue kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
short and sweet and very hot. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Scented Candles [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wipes drool off* i love this story! More! Please! Onegai! |
Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great lemon that made me drool, and I just love Aya being seme and Youji, well I just love these two. Love your style of writing. Look forward to another chapter? heh. |
