| "To Hurt You" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: red_rose_priestess On: September 15, 2005 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good. I'm not really a rape fan fic lover opposed to the yaoi. All I can say is poor Niriko.lol.
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Reviewed By: Kayneko the confuzzled On: June 08, 2004 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I loved it! I loved at the end how most of the times in these kind of fics it will have were the raped one will cry abit and forgive the person (for some odd reason) but I loved how you had Nuriko use a monotone voice to Tasuki... ah.. that fic made my night!
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Reviewed By: MariQ On: April 22, 2004 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just loved this way too much! You are soooo one of the best writers on here! I hope to see more from you!
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Reviewed By: Merle Q. Technofunk On: March 16, 2004 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought that it was pretty heart-breaking, depressing and not exactly something that anyone could do to Nuriko, i mean, isn't she super strong? oh well, it was good nonetheless, i mean i rarely read the same thing twice, and gave me something to think about.
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Reviewed By: poopoo On: April 07, 2003 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a verry good storie |
Reviewed By: Tsuzuku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm wat can i say? simply very well done....though the bondage scenes were not elaborate LoL i love the twist at the end...Hope u continue...ur story plot is wonderful~!It keeps the ready pondering "wat happens next?!" so i really hope u will continue...GAMBATTE~! |
Reviewed By: Kerbuddy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 06:03 CST
Comment/Review:
SQUEAL!!! |
