| "Shadow" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Nanishisummer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 02:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, poor Yami, thinking that yugi doesn't love him. It turns out well in the end though!
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Reviewed By: Motje (not logged in) On: January 13, 2005 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great you know, hardly ever a lemon with a plot, but this one had it, if only it was little. Great!
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Reviewed By: Sanura On: February 14, 2004 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, just wanted to let you know I liked your story! You're a great writer! I hope you write more, and I'll be looking forward to reading it. Plus, the rhyme at the beginning was cool too! Ack! Sorry, I kinda ramble on in these. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Dark_Wind [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 22:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read this on ff.net and loved it. Unfortunately I couldn't review it because my computer is dumb. So, now I am. It was great!!! Super job!! |
Reviewed By: Kuroi Bara no Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Saceria- ^_^ (One of KB's voices [the yami-like one]) No you didn't do bad at all, it was wonderful, wasn't it KB?
KB- Yeah yeah yeah!! ~Jumps up and down~ It was wonderful, I wouldn't have given you 10s on everything I understood if it hadn't been.
Soffia- (KB's Hikari-like voice) I gave you the rest of the 10s cause I liked your style of writing among other things though I completely agree on the lemon thing ~shudders~
Saceria/KB- Spoiled sport.
Saceria- Be open minded sis. It was great!!!! |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 16:15 CDT
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Vewy, vewy, vewy weawwy sweet! It was soo cute! Good lemon too! *Homer Simpson dounut drool* I guess Yami makes up for the lack of party, ne? |
Reviewed By: Yami/Yugi On: March 20, 2003 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Yami Ykarzel. GREAT LEMON! I love it Hikari Ykarzel should of let you do more though. But that was REALLY GOOD anyway. I LOVE IT! Keep writing and keep up the good work the both of you,kay. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 20:20 CST
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I liked that story. It was really interesting. I liked the way you portrayed their feelings toward to other and how they couldn't tell the other how they felt. |
Reviewed By: The Star-Heart's Shards of Amethyst On: July 02, 2003 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
only two reviews? how terrible! this was a wonderful fic, i'm surprised you don't have people swooning at your feet! *smile* very nice job, you should have more faith in your self, hikari Ykarzel-san. |
