| "Beachin' Trip" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Wizardfan22 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 12:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just plain awesome. I'm not usually a fan of Yaoi but this was way too funny not to fave. :)
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Reviewed By: silen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: BrokenHikari On: October 19, 2003 21:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kat:Rose-chan? it was good, ne? Rose: hai,hai, baka hikari Kat: *mumbles* not a baka, *smiles and speaks clearnly* but, this was a great story, and hope you keep all your stories these pairings
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Reviewed By: Tabrina and Tashi On: July 24, 2003 02:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I mean, total wow! I'm sitting here 2:55 in the morning, and reading this, and I'm laughing and it feels if I look out the window I'll be at a beach! That's how good you write! ^__^ I'm gonna take a nap now, and when I wake up I'm reading the rest of your stories!!
Sincerely
Tabs and Tashi (her Yami)
PS: Love the Yaoi couples =3 |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 08:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Evil Inga: 0_0!! OMG! THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!
Evil Yami Inga: *is stuffing his face with doughnuts* MMmuuuuffff!! uuummmff!! ^___\\
Evil Inga: *glares at her yami* what did i tell ya about eatin my doughnuts?!
Evil Yami Inga: 0__\\!! *runs away*
Evil Inga: GET BACK HERE!! *chases after him with her millinum belt* |
Reviewed By: CarrytheSheepdog On: June 28, 2003 13:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi! I love this and my friend loves this also! I can't go it AdultFanfiction.net anymore so try to put the deleted lemons here, please? Keep this up and I have all of your other stories on my computer. (The shadow, Illumate, and Faltse Dawn was good, also. I love My Immortal! So good, yet so sad.)
And If you love Joey/Seto things:
Go to a K-mart, Wal*mart, or a toy place and try to find a Seto 7in. tall and a Joey 7in. tall. You can make them hold eathother. I brung mine (along with Yami 7in.) to the beach. My friend came along and we acted out some senes from you story with Joey and Seto. |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: March 20, 2003 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!! THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST THINGS I HAVE EVER READ!!! WOW! Seriously! ^^ IT ROCKED! SO DO YOU! ^_____^ Soooo funny and kawaii and just so damn much fun!! Thank god Malik and his Yami weren't in here too if they were I wouldn't have surived! ^_^ This was really long. I didn't expect that. I'm not really complaining I still love this fic! You are a great writer! Yaoi Rules! Ja ne! ^_^
Y/Y + B/R + S/J Are the Best!^-^ |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow!! That was soooo funny! I loved it! Are you gonna make a sequel?!?!?!? |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 19:49 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a good story! I loved it! The strip poker game and truth or dare game were really funny! Great job!! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 15:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay for lemons! Add the lemons! Lemons, lemon drops, lemonade, lemon sherbert, lemon, lemon, lemon (I love lemons)
Oh, yeah, the story was good too -.^ Just kidding! This is a very cool story with nifty development with Joey/Seto and Ryou/Bakura.
Yay for lemons! (I think I need to cut back on the sugar) |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 13:48 CST
Comment/Review:
That was GREAT!! Ryou and Bakura were SO funny!! |
