| "Passion And Pillow Talks" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: VamPyro On: April 16, 2005 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CUTE!!!
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Reviewed By: trickydevl66 On: October 10, 2003 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fic. AThere were a few gramatical errors but there were not a lot. I got the one argument metaphor for sex thing. I knew it was something like passion. Before at the end of the thing when you said it was like sex, I knew it was like passion between them, something like that. Well now I am just rambling on so that is my review for your fic. oh yeah it would be good for you to make a sequal or something.
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Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 12:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Damn! That was good! Kinda always thought that's why they fought...really good story. |
