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| "Begins" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Zeva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I can't believe I just read that whole story in one sitting! I love the whole storyline and it's amazing all the time you spent developing those characters! Even though I usually like the Matt/Sora pairing better, I really can see in your story how well Matt and Mimi interact. Tai and Mimi are the lively ones and I can now see how Sora and Matt, being sligtly more calm, would balence them out. Throughout the whole story the characters where always growing and changing. I applaud you for spending the time to create this wonderful story. I was so wrapped up in it I have literally been sitting in front of this computer for 4(ish) hours! As much as I enjoyed reading this, I still want to give you some constructive critisism so that in the future any other stories you write can be that much better. You do have some trouble with spelling, but your biggest struggle would be your use of grammar. I would suggest not only using the spellcheck, but asking someone to read it first before you post it or reading it out loud to your self. Sometimes hearing the words spoken out loud can help you spot what's wrong with them. This is the first of your stories that i've read but i'm looking forward to checking out the rest of them! Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Pan On: October 17, 2001 20:18 CDT
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Some spelling and grammer errors... jeez, read a dictionary... couldn't understand some parts, sayin', "What the f@#*?" NEways... like it so far... write more! | Reviewed By: Pan On: October 22, 2001 20:53 CDT
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I'm sorry Lilac_Kamiya! I didn't mean to rag on your spelling! You seem like a nice person! E-mail me some time! NE ways, I love your stories and please write more! BTW: my site name is PaN-D-SaL! | Reviewed By: ladybird2223 On: November 17, 2001 20:24 CST
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i really like this story and i hope u continue writing it .are u going to bring in any of the second season characters?well keep writing.:):p |
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